RBL CHAMP TOURNEY -DOUBLE TAP MATCH- Beyond V.s Ion Metatron

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Who won this battle?

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  1. Extreme Venom

    Extreme Venom Well-Known Member

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    RAPMUSIC BATTLE LEAGUE


    RBL CHAMPIONSHIP TOURNAMENT

    RMC DOUBLE TAP MATCH​



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  2. Ion Metatron

    Ion Metatron I Punch Faces 4 Fun

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    Check, Im probly doing the full 16 son... gl..
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  3. Beyond..

    Beyond.. New Member

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  4. Ion Metatron

    Ion Metatron I Punch Faces 4 Fun

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    ^^lol He exceeded My expectations but barely made it here dude
    He'll Go above and Beyond the standard to get paid & still lose..
    Leave Bruised from the tourny when I Set it off & Blast Gunz
    This bitch will Fall and Die like Vivica tryinta take the Cash & run..
    Faggot chump won't be in vocal wars wit Beats to bomb cats
    He only Wants to be the text Champ.. He'll NEVER Reach Beyond that
    I'm from New York We get it poppin'..
    This Herb aint Tough Enough to stay
    So I ain't talkin' about Cali Residents when Relay a "fuck the Bey"
    Your Crewmate Tettris Signed in, lost & left... RBL Revoked the Foo'
    Now the Whole crew of 'Dophe dudes', lose & Know just what to do..
    Is it true what Fathers do pass to thier sons? I'm Truly Hopeful..
    Cause that means When I reach my prime
    I'll start fucking Shootin' Dohpe too
    I Make Aliases, start Beef, & ride When its personal
    You herbs make Aliases, Join the league & Hide from a personal
    You get Revived? I'm Remurkin' you,
    He'll remember how I Raped his Chance
    & No show the Champ round when he Sees me at the Gate again..



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  5. Beyond..

    Beyond.. New Member

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    Well this is awkward.

    Must love to get mauled, I. I’m the most rugged of all time.
    Only thing you’ll be 'Paying for' is using the millionth Above & Beyond line.
    Your talk is lame, asshole. I don’t care if u often rain ammo.
    If ya think 'It Off-Sets' u listin movies from '96 u got ur brains Scrambled.
    You ain’t supplyin a godly flow, while I’m tryin to body folks.
    No one wants to hear 'U in an Audio' so I suggest 'U Stay Silent' & Adios.
    I’m flexing with bread, Bey/be/bay? U ain’t texting with cred.
    Let’s be honest, the ONLY thing u’d leave Pronounced correctly is 'dead'.
    I’m itchin for a shot, u ain’t a thug that’s grippin on a glock.
    It’s funny you mention Tettris ‘cause you ain’t never 'Fit in on the Block'.
    U gotta go, chief. U’ll never stop DOHpe from jotting motifs.
    Must’ve lended ur toothpaste to Optimus cuz a 'Prime is outta ur Reach'.
    I’m harder than techs, this is no gimmick I'll martyr your set.
    You only consider me an Alias because unlike u I actually Garner respect.
    I’ll send u & ur girl to Heaven for tryna text with the savior.
    The only Gates you’ll be guarding are Pearly like the Necklace I gave her.
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  6. Beyond..

    Beyond.. New Member

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    Incision ur chest, this is a free win so I’ll paint this vision of death.
    I suggest you keep your 'Ion the Prize' since this is a Gift Decision at best.
    I’m already jottin my next run. Money trouble’s stoppin ur sex, dun.
    Your first post in this thread is the closest you ever got to a 'Check, Son'.
    You got no hype, kid. Facin me is blasphemy & I got roped right in.
    All I’ve seen is MetaSin but the biggest one’d be em reppin DOHpe like him.
    I’ve written sublime, tryin to figure out how to reposition ya spine.
    Punches’ll have 'IM sent to the morgue' like chattin with a mortician online.
    My troubled raps are tight, but here are some subtle facts of life.
    Difference between you and Zombieland is even with a 'Double Tap u bite'.
    I’m ending this textcee, ya ain’t DOHpe while my penning is deadly.
    Met’s about to lose so bad, it’ll mirror his score with John Hensley on NC’s.
    This battle’s uphill for cuzzo, I’ll have this fuck killed on SlutLoad.
    The only 'Links to the Murder' I’ll have result from the Snuff Film I Upload.
    You even living is vile, you’re not a legend so just give me the title.
    All we think of is a bitch whenver Tron Legacy is mentioned.. Olivia Wilde.

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  7. Ion Metatron

    Ion Metatron I Punch Faces 4 Fun

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    I guess I'll go ahead and say Boo before the fuckin' voters do
    When they renamed the Heimlich they should've thought of Choke & you
    Incision, Decision, Vision? MAN! those fuckin' lines were lame
    Its not cause he wack tho
    ...its Cause the "Ion" Ryhmes was on his brain
    I'm in Line for this train when I rape this text Clown
    You'll really feel "awkward" spending CP to suvive Beyond the next round
    You don't have to Believe I'll blow your skull apart,
    .....Cause when your Spines detatched?
    It'll take all the kings horses, Men & mods to fucking revive your ass
    & I ain't talking Zombies when I Beat & rob your Life
    All a Double tap means to me is I get to Eat you alive, Twice!
    I told the Mods, "Nice!..... Please! Feed me more!"
    But Beyond beat them to the punch & posted up like "Eaaat meee Dog!"
    See.. I'm Well known in my Hoods for being Mr.Incognito
    Beyonds well known in his hood for being That inside negro
    He expects to win, thinking everyone Surfs the Hip hop networld & Follows it
    But him & his crew are the only lames that Keep up with online text Politic's

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  8. Gramur

    Gramur Yung Troy

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    1st round

    Ion


    Leave Bruised from the tourny when I Set it off & Blast Gunz
    This bitch will Fall and Die like Vivica tryinta take the Cash & run..
    I'm from New York We get it poppin'..
    This Herb aint Tough Enough to stay
    So I ain't talkin' about Cali Residents when Relay a "fuck the Bey"
    I Make Aliases, start Beef, & ride When its personal
    You herbs make Aliases, Join the league & Hide from a personal

    ^these were the standout lines. The Vivica line made me lol fuck the Bey was nice and Hide from a Personal had nice wordplay...you had others that were decent too..the above and beyond been done to death but you flipped it okay, you'll never get Beyond that was aite nothing special, the personal about Tettris didn't have that much effect since Beyond either undefeated or damn near, shootin dohpe was coo, could have played with the concept a lil more, and the closer was aite, I caught the Gatekeeper concept...overall a pretty solid verse with a few haymakers in there..

    Beyond

    Must love to get mauled, I. I’m the most rugged of all time.
    Only thing you’ll be 'Paying for' is using the millionth Above & Beyond line.
    Your talk is lame, asshole. I don’t care if u often rain ammo.
    If ya think 'It Off-Sets' u listin movies from '96 u got ur brains Scrambled.
    I’m itchin for a shot, u ain’t a thug that’s grippin on a glock.
    It’s funny you mention Tettris ‘cause you ain’t never 'Fit in on the Block'.
    I’m harder than techs, this is no gimmick I'll martyr your set.
    You only consider me an Alias because unlike u I actually Garner respect.

    ^the feed off the above and beyond line was good, that second couplet can go over peoples head easily but it's pretty sick, fit on the block was nice and the actually garner respect was good too...you also had other good disses..stay silent and adios was coo too, some people won't get this personal but I got it, the "leave pronounced correctly is dead" line was straight too...the Optimus Prime line could have been worded better but was aite, and the closer was worded ok and aite too..solid verse and had some haymakers also

    Round 2

    Beyond

    Incision ur chest, this is a free win so I’ll paint this vision of death.
    I suggest you keep your 'Ion the Prize' since this is a Gift Decision at best.
    I’ve written sublime, tryin to figure out how to reposition ya spine.
    Punches’ll have 'IM sent to the morgue' like chattin with a mortician online.
    I’m ending this textcee, ya ain’t DOHpe while my penning is deadly.
    Met’s about to lose so bad, it’ll mirror his score with John Hensley on NC’s.
    You even living is vile, you’re not a legend so just give me the title.
    All we think of is a bitch whenver Tron Legacy is mentioned.. Olivia Wilde.

    ^Ion the prize punch was nice, IM sent to the morgue was good too, the personal about Met's on Netcees and play off his name was good as well as the Tron Legacy/Olivia Wilde...you have some dope concepts..you had some more decent ones also..check son has been done in the past but you flipped it ok, Metasin reference was ok flip but not as hard hitting as other, I wanted to quote the ZombieLand/Double tap u bite line but there was no proof to the line, it was still good though..the snuff film wasn't my favorite but I got it...pretty solid verse here again with some nice hits

    Ion

    I'm in Line for this train when I rape this text Clown
    You'll really feel "awkward" spending CP to suvive Beyond the next round
    & I ain't talking Zombies when I Beat & rob your Life
    All a Double tap means to me is I get to Eat you alive, Twice!
    He expects to win, thinking everyone Surfs the Hip hop networld & Follows it
    But him & his crew are the only lames that Keep up with online text Politic's

    ^Beyond the next round was good, you flipped that Zombieland concept back on him nicely and that personal was funny and good also...you had others..your first two couplets were aite flips on some aite concepts, Kings horses, men, and mods was almost quotable, you got a major swag behind your text, Eat me dogg was kinda simple and inside negro could have been better but overall you had an above average verse here

    this battle was pretty classic if you ask me. Both of you catz got mad skills and I feel like dudes who hope to better there text can look at your shit as blueprints. But anyways, overall, I'm going to have say in the end

    v-Beyond

    Dope Battle
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  9. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    In this battle,I felt that Ion had the better mix of setups and potent,more creative punches.The kind of approach that was and is mainly favored in the eyes of many RBL'ers tends to limit people's creativity and range of material.Beyond came nice,I liked several of his flips and his concepts were crazy.I kinda got the impression he didn't spend that much time on this verse.Ion,on the other hand,went in on each round and while I scored round 1 a close win for Beyond,I scored round 2 a CLEAR victory for Ion...and I used the RWZ categories to make it fair and hate proof.Ion made the most of his opportunity in Round 2 and I think he scored the upset win.I can go into real depth and detail if you guys want me to,either in the Lounge or via PM. Holla at me.

    Good job by both you guys.I'm not just saying that,I mean it.You guys put in work.
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  10. Mrjdm998

    Mrjdm998 New Member

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    VERY close battle. I thought the 1st was about even. Beyond's Optimus Prime line was very weak to me, but Ion overdid the Beyond lines (Above and Beyond for example). Maybe slight edge to Beyond. I found it hard to decide the 2nd round, probebly about even. I like Ions style of battling, but overall Beyond just edged it.

    Vote: Beyond
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  11. TheIlliterate

    TheIlliterate Well-Known Member

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    1st Round

    Ion had some solid lines here, I liked the "fuck the Bey", Vivica, and DOHpe disses. Like Beyond said, you're "beyond" nameplays were played out. I made the same mistake in my battle against him. Beyond came with great rebuttals, especially the Bey/be/bay shit, that really exposed him cuz I had never really thought of the pronunciation before that. You came with some good punches but for a rebuttal verse this wasn't AS good as it should be. You had a couple flips then some filler, which is think cost you this round. Ion was just a bit more consistent here.

    ION WINS ROUND 1 BY A BIT


    2nd Round

    Beyond, you had some killer multi's and internals here, I really dug that shit. Didn't reeally feel the closer but you had a solid start and some great personals. The "IM" line was sort of played out because I know it's been done a few times in a better fashion so it didn't really hold its weight. The 'John Hensley on NC's' line and the "Check, Son" lines were nice, this was your better round. Ion didn't bring it quite as hard as his first round. Rebuttals just weren't as crisp and on-point as Beyond's and for that I think it cost you this round by a slight margin. Kinda felt like you took his punches and just thought up something that rhymed with it in an attempt to flip it, which just isn't as creative as using your own original setup.

    BEYOND WINS ROUND 2 BY A SIZABLE EDGE


    Each battler took 1 verse but overall Beyond brought the better performance out of the two. Dope battle.

    VOTE: BEYOND
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  12. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    First Round

    Ion - the flow was really fantastic, the name plays were ok, but the disses had me laughing, everything about this verse was fresh though, and IMO hard hitting, great way to start it up

    Beyond - Great flips, I think you did a really good job of taking each line and creating your own concept, even though some of the lines seemed forced. I like your attempt at a tighter scheme in this verse than I have seen before.

    Rnd 2

    Beyond - closer was wack, opener was wack, everything in between was fire though lol especially the zombieland line, very witty and creative, but I think in this battle you were better at flipping

    Ion - I think you could have flipped his lines alot better, this verse was lacking the flow aspect that I loved so much from the first verse, the closer was funny, the swag was very strong in this verse but I felt it lacked some attack aggression

    Vote -Ion barely takes it with a great first verse, I felt the first verse was the best in the battle from either battler, Beyond's flip was really good though. Close
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  13. Extreme Venom

    Extreme Venom Well-Known Member

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    Beyond Wins and Advances


    Ion Metatron loses and auto spends his final CP, he will be reseeded
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