Razputin vs. Wordz

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  1. Gsus

    Gsus aka Wordz bka G. Legit

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    20lines (not bars)
    no feeding
    no dr or hate votes
    votes must be explained (bar breakdown fashion)
    3-0ko
    First to 5 win
    U spit first...lets get it
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  2. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    I havn't seen you drop first in any of your battles, you either drop first or we can drop same time
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  3. Gsus

    Gsus aka Wordz bka G. Legit

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    lol will it matter...but ok, i'll drop first...just got off work, it'll be up by the end of today my time
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  4. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    Ayo like a DJ with Grillz and a Bic, I'll let the Drama Spark
    killin this bitch, sticking him in a box quicker than Chinese ala cart
    laugh at this a rhyming Allah, God, and since you asked for this
    I'ma get hella personal, snatch his bitch as an excuse to blaphemous
    and I ain't frugal with the punches, I'm no Jew when hittin
    but shit, one right hook will Cross his eyes like crucifixion
    your lines get no response, afterwordz there's no OH's Gsus
    unless your mother's voting on caskets and she saying OH GSUS!
    I understand why you wanted to use your alias here
    Cause my wordplay is prolly the best you've heard or said in years
    Gsus' lines was stretched, I hope Wordz got a different plan
    cause by the time YOU to get to YOUR punch, nobody gives a damn
    Whether it's Cakalak or Cockitback, i'll pack the mac and cock it back
    go Norf, arrive on his porch, knock on his door..Rat a Tat like the Chronic track
    Halloween's over yet I'm still in a stockin mask
    so next time you talkin Jazz expect the tech to eject to ya chest like a stockton pass
    took him days to write his verse, this fag kept googling Rasputin
    tried to flip my name but his ass couldn't, learned that I foresaw my own death and guess what...
    it won't happen because of your RAPS stupid!
    this ain't no movie but cats shootin, think it's funny? i'll take the money like Cam Newton
    bitch you coming up shorter than Sonny Bamboo
    and this battle's a ball game, body bag, AND a gunny sack, dude!
    you softer than souffle, I'm the predator you the prey
    wrote this last week, you'll read it 1000 times and take too more days
    then drop a verse with quotations that don't work like your myspace music page
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  5. Gsus

    Gsus aka Wordz bka G. Legit

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    Listen....

    This battle like a "breached birth"...before you get a vote it'll be "de-feet first"...its game time, pull out ya strategy guide and make sure every cheat works...u gotta "unemployed" flow, it "needs work"...thats why in each verse... he says something like when its "beef, I go ham"...cuz he just wanted to "meat Wordz"/

    Even wit "gas, win"? ya "ass couldnt"...he "soft and sweet", his name should be "Razpuddin"...his girl thick, so i pulled out a camera and "12inches of dick", like whats goodish?...then "got some ass", "foot"-age...when we got finished, she yelled, "Im tired of this bullshit, cuz I dont "feel a thing" when "Raz-put-in"/

    This aint "scrabble", dont think u can "play wit Wordz"...oh u in a gang, well u gonna "go out wit a bang", like my "gun dated ya first"...Im being nice when I say, "I hated ya verse"...

    I mean "Mascara" could "make-up" better lines...u steal wins, I kill men, committin better crimes...u gettin "Sun'd", where's ya shine?...Im pimp'n this homo, every letter mine...cuz he get paid to "take the kids", like Kevin Federline/

    Rappers afraid of me, so I guess its true, ya dads' scary...son me, never, ask mary...u spit punchlines, and every jab parried...then set u on fire like a mad Carrie...cuz he a "fruit" and every "punch'll" leave "Raz-buried" (raspberry'd)/
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  6. Mista FREEZE 2001

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    *FREEZE impressed*

    This actually was the CLOSEST BATTLE I have ever seen on RM! 4 REAL! Usually one verse out shines the other but I thought they both were on point...

    RAZ I like your entire verse.. U had a better structure than GSUS but I felt U kinda let off the gas towards the end. Not a lot but U missed a REAL KNOCKOUT BLOW! Still NICE tho...

    Now GSUS U surprised me. U R Better than I thought U would be. I did hate that U took a bit long to reply! I hate when ppl don't post for days or weeks later! I actually think U R great as a text battler and your punches were honestly harder than RAZ... SERIOUSLY! The thing is RAZ has a better structure and his verse was just more pleasing with a better flow! I think if U structure your verses better and worked on your rhyme scheme U WOULD BE A BEAST!

    Anyway I know this sounds like a cop out but I HONESTLY CAN'T CHOOSE! I REALLY BELIEVE IT'S A DRAW! NO JOKE!

    I NEED ANOTHER ROUND WITH THE SAME RULES!

    THIS I COMMAND!!!
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  7. miscreant

    miscreant 1996 was the shit

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    again

    same shit wit the flow, im startin to think text battles aren't supposed to flow over a beat

    which is pointless

    but anyway

    i'd have to give my vote to wordz
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  8. Gsus

    Gsus aka Wordz bka G. Legit

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    1-0 my way
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  9. miscreant

    miscreant 1996 was the shit

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    This battle like a "breached birth"...before you get a vote it'll be "de-feet first"...its game time, pull out ya strategy guide and make sure every cheat works...u gotta "unemployed" flow, it "needs work"...thats why in each verse... he says something like when its "beef, I go ham"...cuz he just wanted to "meat Wordz"/

    ^that shit was just dope

    I mean "Mascara" could "make-up" better lines...u steal wins, I kill men, committin better crimes...u gettin "Sun'd", where's ya shine?...Im pimp'n this homo, every letter mine...cuz he get paid to "take the kids", like Kevin Federline/

    ^nice

    cuz he a "fruit" and every "punch'll" leave "Raz-buried" (raspberry'd)/

    ^finished nice too


    just wanted to clarify why i gave my vote to wordz
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  10. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Raz:

    Whether it's Cakalak or Cockitback, i'll pack the mac and cock it back
    go Norf, arrive on his porch, knock on his door..Rat a Tat like the Chronic track

    Halloween's over yet I'm still in a stockin mask
    so next time you talkin Jazz expect the tech to eject to ya chest like a stockton pass

    i was diggin the two lines i posted. i also thought the Rasputin/Raps Stupid line had potential, but i didnt like the way it was structured/flowed. aside from that though you had a really sick flow to this verse and kept up a solid rhyme scheme the entire way through.

    Gsus: i liked the Raz-put-in line the best from this verse. but i really didnt like the way you structured it. the verse read like a paragraph instead of a verse. i thought the Meat Wordz line had potential but it fell short. you had some nice rhymes in there. props on that.

    vote- Raz
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  11. BLACK ATTICUS

    BLACK ATTICUS An Actual Show Rocka!!

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    ok..first i thought this was an easy decision, then i went back and re-read the verses; hot shit on both ends. raz's line about 'write a verse quotations that don't work like ya myspace music page' ...................that was fire. in fact those last four bars went to town as well.

    you softer than souffle, I'm the predator you the prey
    wrote this last week, you'll read it 1000 times and take too more days
    then drop a verse with quotations that don't work like your myspace music page
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    yeah clean.

    Gsus had a more tangible flow, i can see a lot of it working offline and some of it ONLY online. the quotations is understandable, but not ALL the time. it makes me feel like you don't trust the reader to get it. i was feeling all the stanzas except the one about 'ya girl thick' -- i felt that whole section was reaching, and the end stanza bout lost me til you finished it with that strong ass line.

    i'm with my dude when he said this was really close. no one left the other in the dust, however it's a battle and someone's gotta take a W and the other an L:

    vote - Gsus
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  12. Gsus

    Gsus aka Wordz bka G. Legit

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    2-1 uppin
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  13. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    would you quit aimin for votes, geesh
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  14. Gsus

    Gsus aka Wordz bka G. Legit

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    wtf...how am i aimin for votes? i just noted the score and upped this...wow....
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  15. Da Shorty Man

    Da Shorty Man Tha ILL AUTHeNTIC

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    Gsus had more personal attacks and better
    Punches. A couple lines was played like a maufukka tho, like the defeet line.
    Anyway...Gsus a lil easier to follow.

    Vote..Gsus
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  16. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    what personal did he have?
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  17. Gsus

    Gsus aka Wordz bka G. Legit

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    some people consider name flips as personals
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  18. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    shit just seems suspect to me bro, your votes are very vague, i don't think this battle should be decided by those shitty ass votes leave this thread open a while
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  19. Radical Sun

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    Raz:
    Gsus' lines was stretched, I hope Wordz got a different plan
    cause by the time YOU to get to YOUR punch, nobody gives a damn
    HAHAHA!
    Whether it's Cakalak or Cockitback, i'll pack the mac and cock it back
    go Norf, arrive on his porch, knock on his door..Rat a Tat like the Chronic track
    Halloween's over yet I'm still in a stockin mask
    so next time you talkin Jazz expect the tech to eject to ya chest like a stockton pass


    wrote this last week, you'll read it 1000 times and take too more days
    then drop a verse with quotations that don't work like your myspace music page


    GSUS/WORDZ:
    This battle like a "breached birth"...before you get a vote it'll be "de-feet first"...its game time, pull out ya strategy guide and make sure every cheat works...u gotta "unemployed" flow, it "needs work"...thats why in each verse... he says something like when its "beef, I go ham"...cuz he just wanted to "meat Wordz"/

    That Kevin Federline sh!t was tight too man.

    Overall I liked Raz' verse better
    Vote: Raz
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  20. Gsus

    Gsus aka Wordz bka G. Legit

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    3-2 my way uppin again
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