RaZpUTIN Vs. smittyrhythm

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  1. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    16-20 lines
    verses due in a week
    first to 5 votes wins

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  2. smittyrhythm

    smittyrhythm you love 2 hate me

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    Fuck it..

    You stepped like RP2G and A.R., slipped and got stuck in the quicksand
    Aint 'off of the chain' your bars got 'breaks' and stood me up like a 'kickstand'
    Yo what a bitch in the kids fam, walk in this 'thread' you'll get stitch strands - and have ya head get scanned with so many bars you'll look like a clone of the 'Hitman'
    A number of days and nothin to say, you shoud've picked with another date
    You was Subway's Jared of the RBL but never ate, still he's under weight
    You took on GSUS, another fake, but couldnt finish your last supper plate
    The way his punches spun this fruit backwards and 'burried-Raz', the 'whine' wasn't grape
    But wait-
    You give your number to hoes but you're never gettin under their clothes
    Cuz you couldnt get a bitch to 'blow Raz' with her tongue out and her thumb on her nose
    And if it came to shittin dildo's by the inch I bet you 'Raz poo ten'
    If he had a bitch and the chick's a dime, my dick = what he'r azz put in'

    I'll spit a raunchy tonsil hockey at the posse of this fagot-ass closet commy
    Suicide mission, and it isn't Nibs when you crash and burn like a 'comic-aussie'
    His join up date was in '99: you've been in this game for a decade?
    But your name it still aint 'hit a shelf'? You're like a maid with no pledge spray
    No reputation made, no CDs played or album records that's fresh
    Too bad the historical number of deaths you took is the only 'record' you've ever set
    You will never see global, your 'radio-activities' local - I'll melt you down into plant-food and no one here's thinkin that 'Chernobyl' (you're noble)
    Came Russian in and Iran the field cuz I'm way more Hungary than U, K?
    Get put in Czech, Jamaica scream when I sweep the leg soon as Ukraine
    You wantin Tibet if I'm Syria's? I'll Greece my Poland fuck written leagues
    You really think that Raz is 'off of the map' at spittin a battle rap? -
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  3. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    my bad about the delay

    yo you could give smittyrhythm a Dre beat and he'd still have a shittyrhthym
    I'll find him In da club then let the 50 HIT him
    like Pusha T and Malice exitin', the Clipse I'm emptyin
    to contest with my flow, you'll need metronomes, seven or so
    I didn't get it cause I didn't deserve to? no, it's cause ya text is so incomprehensible
    99% of the time you can't fuck with the rights of RaZpUTIN bitch
    and every punchline of yours that I consider nice, I had to google it
    purposely, turning this arena of emcees into a murder scene
    it's like I'm going to college for 12 years how I'm gettin THIRD degree
    your intelligent as hell and shit but pardon the nerd flow
    cuz you were born with a rhythm that rivals steve martin in the jerk, yo
    you got zero victories in a year so let's be factual here
    the rbl lost it's credibility, and YOU can't even battle there
    you're a bitch with your tactics, after chicks dump your ass it's hurtful
    then your prone to Kia car like those fucking hamsters in that commercial
    I blast bazookas and pack some massive techs
    the only rpg you ever blast was giving bad reviews of mass effect
    I'll grasp yer windpipe fast then slice this faggot properly
    I'll take yer breath away then laugh like a romantic comedy
    the aftermath of RaZ blammin them hammers, is corpses
    you're gettin dumped in the river quicker than salmon divorces
    you ain't tryna win you're just writing to swim and I'm undermining him
    shit, a thousand white bitches would find rhythm before 5-0's finding him
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  4. smittyrhythm

    smittyrhythm you love 2 hate me

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    he showed!! :funny: GJ & GL
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  5. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Smitty,no trippin...this is thee most creative verse I've ever seen from you.Lolol I've seen country nameplays before but not this many and not with such consistent power and caliber.

    And this from Raz was like haha dope!

    "your intelligent as hell and shit but pardon the nerd flow
    cuz you were born with a rhythm that rivals steve martin in the jerk, yo
    you got zero victories in a year so let's be factual here
    the rbl lost it's credibility, and YOU can't even battle there
    you're a bitch with your tactics, after chicks dump your ass it's hurtful
    then your prone to Kia car like those fucking hamsters in that commercial
    I blast bazookas and pack some massive techs
    the only rpg you ever blast was giving bad reviews of mass effect
    I'll grasp yer windpipe fast then slice this faggot properly
    I'll take yer breath away then laugh like a romantic comedy"

    And that thousand white bitches finding rhythm/5-0 closer was cold RaZ.Me like.On the real man RaZ if you could promise to be timely? This is the kind of battle that could and maybe should go 2-3 rounds because you guys have different styles and spit them with power confidence and poise.You guys appeal to diff tastes.RaZ's grammar n hype is more the "blamma" type and witty smitty is off da charts with the sickly spit he tossed like darts.Lol,hey that rhymed. Anway...

    What got me was that smitty was by far the more original AND his punches held zing in them.RaZ's punches packed zing but he wasn't as original,his rhyme scheme wasn't as layered,and his knowledge base wasn't as comprehensive. In the comprehensive categories of quality rap (look at the R.W.Z. categories) smitty took 8 of the 12 categories for the win imho.

    If yall ain't going a round 2? I gotta say

    VOTE: SMITTY
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  6. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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  7. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Yo! You guys going a round 2? This battle is honestly too close to call...for real...
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  8. bombtharhymes

    bombtharhymes New Member

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    Both tight on both ends...round 2 !!
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  9. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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  10. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    both were real nice pieces, flow and wordplay (that country stuff was great),
    i'd have to give it to smitty,
    as for punch complexity (decade/pledge spray line was neat tho smit) and overall cleverness, gotta go to raz,
    but I'd also have to give it to smitty on the multis...
    by a narrow margin

    Vote=smitty


    *but, i think if this was an audio battle, raz would've got it...
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  11. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    uppin good battle smit
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  12. smittyrhythm

    smittyrhythm you love 2 hate me

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    thank you sir, good battle raz.. youre a good writer.
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