Ray is on Ruckus (Anilyst's Challenge)

Discussion in 'Audio Emcee Hook Ups' started by RayRayJr, Aug 15, 2013.

  1. RayRayJr

    RayRayJr New Member

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    Yo, I put out a video for my man @AnilystMusic

    About a month ago he put out a challenge to spit some bars on his Ruckus track, and Im just asking for some feed back. What to improve on or watever.
    It's my first recorded and uploaded verse.
    Mind you Im only 15 so going easy on me lol.
    Aiight thanks for readingand commenting. peace keep it real yall
    412PA rep.
    -Ray
    test
  2. SHITTY Bang Bang

    SHITTY Bang Bang freestyle fanatic

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    get meaner and angrier lol and also stop punching in, work on your breath control.
    test

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