Rapper's Microphone...

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  1. Gemini_TwIIn

    Gemini_TwIIn a.k.a. Sydephex

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    Starting off I was spoken to with nothing less than respect
    People loved my company and you could always expect
    Pure straight forward talking just put beautifully plain
    Only worry of these people was to ensure they entertain
    I lived this having good times for almost half a decade
    But I was then discarded, rejected so its was home I stayed

    Many years I stayed resting never seeing the spotlight
    I thought my future in the business was now not bright
    I was no longer good enough my people had scattered
    Until one day I was taken to a club I was mad flattered

    The people I met here took shit to a whole new level
    Saw some old friends of my genre for years my crew revel
    In the complexity we heard these men were masterminds
    They're superior brains seemed to be of a much faster kind
    I thought these men of genius must have the most cash
    But the way they dressed seemed more like gross trash
    For years I tried to comprehend how this could happen
    But it seems people wanted superficial 'hood'- rapping

    Elevated once more, I start hanging in a high-profile arena
    Each person that talks to me just tries hard to seem meaner
    Than the previous but I realise that most of them are weak
    But even the softest uses this supposed hard man technique
    Everyone says to me that they got more guns than the rest
    Or how they have the best cars, chains and yes you guessed
    Every single male in the place gets ALL the ladies with ease
    Claim this even when they're face looks like they got a disease
    I hear nothing but bling bling and the shit gets too repetitive
    In my last club most these dudes would not be competitive
    So I see suicide is the only way out I get my circuit blown
    Life's so shit these days when you're a rappers microphone...
    test
  2. *GeMiNeYeZ*

    *GeMiNeYeZ* ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~

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    nice piece.. you told the story well. i especially like the last part...

    "I hear nothing but bling bling and the shit gets too repetitive
    In my last club most these dudes would not be competitive
    So I see suicide is the only way out I get my circuit blown
    Life's so shit these days when you're a rappers microphone..."


    thats the friggin TRUTH man! great job.
    test
  3. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    I love the topical sense of this piece with a very nice storyline to it. You followed it on subject throughout the whole joint and I respect it even more from doing that. I'd love to hear it done recorded and through audio with a strong background beat so the listener may feel the elevation within the writing, as it proceeds through the story. Helps the reader/listener feel it a bit more, na'mean? My blessings..
    test
  4. Gemini_TwIIn

    Gemini_TwIIn a.k.a. Sydephex

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    Yeah I'm also thinking about it to record this one...thanx for the feedback guys, still uppin^
    test
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