Rapmusic Battle League Wk 1 - GrimaceMcgee Vs King John

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  1. KroniK

    KroniK R.I.P. U

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  2. GrimaceMcgee

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  3. King John

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    Checkin' in
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  4. King John

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    Can I still post?
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  5. TheIlliterate

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    ^ If you post now, you'll get the no show win. Just do it. Key up 12 bars.
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  6. GrimaceMcgee

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    same question..wanna just do a quick 12?
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  7. King John

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    Yeah that's cool.
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  8. GrimaceMcgee

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    Its only right I wreck him, Its not cookin oil when I ignite the wesson
    Have him count his blessings when I put metal to king's head like a knighting session
    On some nerd shit pull out the proton cannons, and plasma gats
    That'll leave his bones fractured, hopes shattered and asthma attacks
    Come to your block, dump quick, conquer like I should
    Let 32 go ..Blake Griffin when I send them clips' flyin over his hood
    He be on some homo shit, known to keep his mouth wide like yawns
    He should be pissed, arent Johns usually known to be shitted on
    Fuck it take the silencer off and let that mutha fucker sing
    Lead pulled, show em red bull not the only thing that'll give him wings
    Leave his dame floored, techu sword leave his frame torn
    Holes through out his body like a connect 4 game board

    12..horrible lines but done
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  9. King John

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    You're WACK FOR REAL you know I'm PACKING STEEL and your CAP GETS PEELED
    So with the 'Clipper and the Mag' I'll put "Grimace in a Bag".........HAPPY MEAL!
    You really think that you're SICK AT RAP? Nigga you're SPITS ARE WACK
    Plus this KID'S A RAT, so it's "game over when I catch the snitch" like a QUIDDITCH MATCH
    When it comes to your girl, you know that I'm HITTIN IT, DAM!
    She's unZIPPING MY PANTS while she on the phone with you like "Baby I'm BUSY JUST SCRAM"
    You say you love her while she got my DICK IN HER HAND
    Then I filled the bitch with more rubber than the MICHELIN MAN///
    You PACK NINES,BEAMS? Bitch you'd break your hand if you try to use the type of GATS I SQUEEZE
    So when you hear "BOOM BOOM POW" it's not the BLACK EYED PEAS
    Nigga your raps are TRASH,HORRID put him to sleep cause this CAT'S BORING
    Plus my punches 'Tyson Strong' so like what he's 'Typing On' it's a WRAP FOR HIM (rap forum)
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  10. NO SIR E

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    Grimace got that pretty easily. Shit flowed a lot better, and more well-put together.

    King John was ok, but several lines sounded like something Charron would write...and that's not good.
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  11. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    pretty good battle.

    Grimace - really liked the flow, alot of the punches were clever and hard hitting, im not a big fan of gun lines but you used them creatively so all in all this was a solid verse

    KJ - I liked the use of caps to punctuate and highlight your flow as well as your punches, you have a smart scheme with lots of imagery and aggression but I felt the creativity was not at Grimace's level. Great nameplay at the start though

    Vote -Grimace by a bit.
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  12. smittyrhythm

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    Its only right I wreck him, Its not cookin oil when I ignite the wesson
    Have him count his blessings when I put metal to king's head like a knighting session
    ---- ehhh, damnit...this had some sick potential. I really liked where this nameplay was going but when a king is crowned it isnt a 'knighting session'

    On some nerd shit pull out the proton cannons, and plasma gats
    That'll leave his bones fractured, hopes shattered and asthma attacks
    ----- missing the punch, no real association between set-up and finish

    Come to your block, dump quick, conquer like I should
    Let 32 go ..Blake Griffin when I send them clips' flyin over his hood
    ----- meh, ok.. bars are little short.

    He be on some homo shit, known to keep his mouth wide like yawns
    He should be pissed, arent Johns usually known to be shitted on
    ----- lol

    Fuck it take the silencer off and let that mutha fucker sing
    Lead pulled, show em red bull not the only thing that'll give him wings
    ----- hmm

    Leave his dame floored, techu sword leave his frame torn
    Holes through out his body like a connect 4 game board
    ----- hmmm... more gun-play threats :-/

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    You're WACK FOR REAL you know I'm PACKING STEEL and your CAP GETS PEELED
    So with the 'Clipper and the Mag' I'll put "Grimace in a Bag".........HAPPY MEAL!
    ---- Ouch

    You really think that you're SICK AT RAP? Nigga you're SPITS ARE WACK
    Plus this KID'S A RAT, so it's "game over when I catch the snitch" like a QUIDDITCH MATCH
    ----- good harry potter wordplay

    When it comes to your girl, you know that I'm HITTIN IT, DAM!
    She's unZIPPING MY PANTS while she on the phone with you like "Baby I'm BUSY JUST SCRAM"
    ----- ehhhhhhh

    You say you love her while she got my DICK IN HER HAND
    Then I filled the bitch with more rubber than the MICHELIN MAN
    ------ got jokes, sawed-off bars

    You PACK NINES,BEAMS? Bitch you'd break your hand if you try to use the type of GATS I SQUEEZE
    So when you hear "BOOM BOOM POW" it's not the BLACK EYED PEAS
    ----- LOL, I hate gun-plays but this is funny

    Nigga your raps are TRASH,HORRID put him to sleep cause this CAT'S BORING
    Plus my punches 'Tyson Strong' so like what he's 'Typing On' it's a WRAP FOR HIM
    ----- sick


    This is pretty one-sided for me, Johns got some material on him. Good stuff.
    Grimace had 2 good nameplays, but the rest was all empty threats and gun-play

    vote/ KJ

    I challenge King John, whether in the tourney or in the field. You belong in my graveyard.
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  13. DethStryque

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    I think KING JAMES swept this battle...his punches were vicious creative and the caps in the rhyme scheme reminds me of my first drops on RM late last year. I still like that style and I appreciate that others feel it too. I agree with almost everything IAMBENT said,but I apply his conclusions more positively toward King James than Grimace...and I think that Grim knew that he didn't bring it like he usually does and like we know he can.

    Both guys went in but Grimace didn't drop like he usually does and KJ went in like a Navy SEAL soldier mission.

    VOTE KING JAMES
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  14. Mrjdm998

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    KJ had better wordplay and rhyming which is pretty much what it comes down to in a battle like this considering the style. They both had quite a few weak lines (In a box was lines, pretty much any of the lines which have no wordplay) but I feel KJ was more consistent throughout his verse.

    Vote: King james
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  15. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    Vote= king James

    Jk had the more fluid verse with better punchlines

    Grimace started off strong and fell off at the end,red bull line is played, although a very close battle king James took this one,

    Grimace in a bag and Blake griffen were lines of the battle
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  16. TheIlliterate

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    Damn this was fun to read. Both of you got really dope styles, even though you probably rushed your verses.

    KJ came great but he definitely had that Charron style to him. Some creative schemes and nice multis but I think Grim packed harder punches and a concise flow.

    This will probably come down to personal preference.
    Close battle. I'm giving it to Grimace.
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  17. King John

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    A couple things, first I aint never see a full Charron battle, so don't know how his bars are, second, it's King JOHN not James. Good battle though.
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  18. Extreme Venom

    Extreme Venom Well-Known Member

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    Final vote count 4-3 King John..


    King John wins..









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