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  1. NineFiveZeroOne

    NineFiveZeroOne ^Da Phuck iT Mean?

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    beat... its decent, samples were a lil rough but overall decent

    First dood... style was smooth, voice and lyrics nice....

    hook was itchin the wack side....

    second dood was iight, needs to clean up his voice and delivery.


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  2. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    thanks for the feed....
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  4. TOOBxSOCKS

    TOOBxSOCKS Code of the Samurai

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    returnin feed:

    did u already post this before or something?? seems like ive heard it before...or maybe i just heard the beat...beats tight...

    but anyway...shit was pretty tight overall....feelin ya prescense...flows nice too....title of the track cool...some good shit man...id listen to it here n there...

    thanks for the feed on my joint...its appreciated...
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  5. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    word ,same here upped
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  7. Stareo Tipe

    Stareo Tipe Look me in the Face

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    good start, work at it....listening..and maybe cuz im comparing you too DZA DZK CELPH and ³³³³³z i JUST LISTENED TO...this isnt soundin so hot??

    its not wack..you guys can rap..but...its like..more is needed here..lil bit MORE of everything to put ya stuff ova da top..i duno..just..not A shyt fa me...

    stay at it:

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=12629671#post12629671
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  8. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    lol ya ok ,thanx fo rthe feed ....
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  9. tampas_illest

    tampas_illest New Member

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    like the name of the track, energy is nice..1st verse is real clear. 2nd cat had a nice balance to this track this is dope man. i could get sown with this type shit. Check me out. we would vibe nice

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=926182
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  10. KamikazeLyricist

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    word Im wit that thanx for the feed ...
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  11. Dubz Dilinger

    Dubz Dilinger 2 gun Un

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    beat is type hot.

    voice ain't all that to me, flow is good tho, spittin on point...i aint even kno that was a hook...aint really feelin the hook, i aint really like the second dude...'losin ya left eye is the only way you see right' ...could've done with out...you had the better verse of the two...it's iight, not somethin i'd play and shit tho
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  12. KamikazeLyricist

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    thanx for the feed ...
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  13. KamikazeLyricist

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    upped drop them links ...
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  16. KamikazeLyricist

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    thanx for the feed , I'll hit that link in the AM ..
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  18. raidar

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    eh ... feelin the royce like flow but the quality is ehh ... dont like ya voice that much tho ya flow is pretty ill and the lyrics are decent .... so far this aiight the beat is pretty dramatic ... drums can use work but ill sample on the real ... hook is just decent and second verse is ehhh but all together its a decent track
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  19. KamikazeLyricist

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    lol thanx for the feed ....
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  20. Vise

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    ight....damn, this apex beat has been used to death online. this has to be the 50th song i've heard over this beat.


    first guy got a angry swagga. flow falls off a lil here and there, but def ain't bad. the delivery is there.

    hook is simple. to the point. not catchy, but not bad either

    second dude flow is all over there snares. delivery is there, but his flow is sloppy tho. iono.



    not a bad collabo, but not that great either. i loved that arrow collabo where you two spit endlessly back and forth. that was just beautiful. compared to that tho, this is....a lil average, especially for you man, cuz you've come along way as a emcee since i first heard you drop on RM. no hate tho, just being honest..next track, come with that fiyah that i had gotten used to hearin from you, 1
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