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  1. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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  2. PPRO

    PPRO PROFOUND

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    Ok, this is going to be tuff. on this joint I didn't feel it was whack, but I still wouldn't play it. I just don't like it. It's put together well and your skill is there. But I don't like the song.
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  3. MisterE

    MisterE Look @ His Face Now!

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    listenin


    intro cool


    beat nice, i like the tragic dramatic feel



    first cats quality is ooey.......nice spit tho......lyrics cool, delivery pretty nasty, hard hittin style





    chorous aiight......not catchy enough to bump in the whip, but cool underground feel......nice




    second cats emotion is cool.....could use some vocal polishin, but lyrics and presence are cool



    overall its a nice track......you were on the "reppin for the lyricists" tip, and pulled it off nicely




    return the lovely



    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=926037
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  4. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    word thanx for the feed I'll return that in a minute ... and ya this aint my usual recordin equipment so bare wit me ...
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  5. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    upped .........
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  6. Pace Beats

    Pace Beats Doesn't Feed The Trolls

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    You Look like bird thats why they call you the bird man
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  7. Ben Official

    Ben Official Active Member

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    this beats sick as fuck haha

    deliverys all there, every thing is hella on point

    you sound HELLA like royce, style wise... HELLA

    flows sick, emotion is ill

    hook is tight

    quality isnt that good but shits a dope track for sure
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  8. Buonarotti

    Buonarotti NINELEVEN

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    FLOWS ON POINT, NO DOUBT, YOU CAN ALWAYS COUNT ON KAMIKAZI TO PUT IT DOWN WITH THE FLOW PART ,,,BEATS SICK, I THINK THE VOCS JUST NEED TO BE TURNED UP A BIT,,,and NASTY,,,,,,CAME NASTY.
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  9. DMH.

    DMH. The G.O.D.

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    Returning the favor...the beat is real hot. Your voice is decent, decent flow..lacks at some parts though. The multies are tight..real nice emotion too. The chorus is eh..not real bad though. Overall a decent drop..keep it up.
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  10. Slim & AC

    Slim & AC New Member

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    beat is good not my type thou...flow is ok nothing really good about it....u have some really dope multies...emotion is really good...chorus is ehh u could of done something betta meng that was u just lacking...some nice lyricz thou...quality is ehh but dont really matter good drop...

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=926677
    ^Reply plz...
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  11. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    thanx I'll reply after I smoke ...
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  12. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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  13. Elias_Returns

    Elias_Returns New Member

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    yea the first verse is hot. nice lines and flow. I'm feeling your style 2 did remind me a lil of royce but pac a lil 2 for some reason, good emotion 2. Feeling the hook aswell. 2nd cat came in nicely 2, He definitely adds a different flow to the song to so it definitely adds to the track. Nice lines and good emotion aswell. This joint is sick and i'm feeling the beat because of the dramatic feelin 2.

    Overall I guess the final product could sound more polished qualitywise and its ready for the street. Keep up the good work man. Peace.
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  14. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    thanx I appreciathe the feed ... upped
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  15. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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  16. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    bump................
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  17. .The omen.

    .The omen. Member

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    aight lets peep.. ive always liked this beat apex... 1st dude comes in nyceeee. im lovin these lyrics, n flow is on point, bleed for it like ulcers... punchlines parapolegics.. daaaamn he's rippin it uppp... daaamn that lassst line was sickness.. hook is reaal nyce no doubt.. 2nd dude, comes in reaaaal nyce man, flow is butter, lyrics arent as appealing to me as first dude, but still illness, see right... week fight.. lol sum hitters here.. yea man this was def hotnesss. geez. 1st dude shined more to me...

    but whatever yo, either 1 of yall gotta get up on a joint w/ me in tha future, lemme know whats good
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  18. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    word thanx Omen .... get at me ... ...
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  19. HeXuM

    HeXuM N.E.R.D.

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    not feelin the beat.. flow is ok.. lyrics are not catchin my ear at all.. hooks borin, doesnt say anything .. next dude sounds like a guy named Weapon X from B - Boys. Com.. flow and delivery is nice.. liked that verse.. it was on point.. dope voice on dude.. damn this was kinda short.. quality was ok.. mixin could be better.. anyway ok drop.. not anything i would give a 2nd listen to.. stay up n doin ya thing tho..

    return the love...
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=921614
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  20. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    thanx for the feed ...
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