Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Got Life?, Mar 30, 2008.
though in retrospect i don't mind the negative rep.
lol, he was in a bookstore the entire time
the stomach scene was he rubbing the bomb strapped to his stomach, not so obviously but that's what it was meant, and the trigger was the trigger to the bomb
haha that made me laugh..i like the spunk! I guess i deserved that.. but I only felt the need to explain because it went so well with this weeks beef talk and I wanted to make sure people incorporated my verse to the information from the week an get my metaphors.. I really dont care about the votes, you had a good verse, im not gonna play the hate card, all I know is my shit was written better... I base my matches on how I evaluate other matches because a good writer is good enough to notice a good verse, an realize the better one... If you honestly think your shit was better, thats cool, we all have our own opinions which is why the match is tied.. go ahead an explain your verse more if you have to, I encourage it.. at the end of the day I think mine was better.. the rest is up to the voters..
i may be late but this was still funny as hell,
you had me going up until the rstl child thing which is exactly the same time i started limh (laughing in my head)
i see where the trigger could be confused for a gun which is not what i meant
i should have opted for "remote" or some other noun to describe it, and i could have revealed the bomb a little clearer but i wanted less gore and more vivid imagery and things of that nature, so i skipped the actual explosion scene, but everyone is presumed dead or injured after the explosion, thus the injury list
i also had a segment describing that the man/father/author visited there every morning for coffee but it seemed too fillerish so i cut it
and the daughter is introduced to show that he is literally cut off from the rest of the world, but her death is innocent as she was only an innocent bystander, he was so consumed in the words of his father that he had cut off all reality and didnt notice the people laughing at him while he was going crazy in the chair and reading certain parts aloud and moving and gripping the rests, he also didnt notice his daughter in the same sense
i would have p/m'd this as i did the rest, but i'll respond here since TR posted here
that should offer some sort of clarity
since Q had to up the mimic, i figure why not make them both show face on the latest page to keep it balanced : )
lol, check your p/m
^didn't get it
they were in my sent mail so it went somewhere.. I replied twice.. an resent them both...
i may have had you on ignore
ima vote on the rest tomo so fucken tired - some real decent reads this week - god damn fire
ck, go get some rest...your reading comprehension is clearly suffering....
and honestly, from this point on...the next person ever talking about their verse or what not with explanation...that shit is getting moved straight to the same place that all of pent up's posts go.
ya'll are lame herbs.
Could someone lend this man a "No Homo"? He's all out.
Rofl Double ML has known me forever...
then why don't you two go skipping through a park with butterflies and daisies.
gl shit on me like 5x w/o me even in the thread
backstabber. i thought we were fam.
7 pages of nothing
i guess this is what happens when there's no magazine
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