Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by xX_NASTY_Xx, May 31, 2009.
^Yeah, cause your verse was a more well written topical work of art then mine was:screwy:
LOL.. wtf ever..
ok, ApoGee is not gonna post, so can I get some of yah in my thread with some criticism......I'd appreciate it mayne
an @blitz, like i said, i aint takin nothin from your shit, i thought the rhyme schemes were cool, the content was funny, it was a cool piece for bein a comedy joint, but my shit is structured, I got a story, I got certain amount of lines dedicated to each part so I dont drag, make sure it moves well. I even told you before you posted though, I can see your verse bein preferred by some, I guess I was just surprised how many preferred it.
damn i lost
^You couldve won. I didnt read anyone elses votes, but I feel like you lost on topic choice. You went at it kinda silly an while it was funny an well written, most people probly went for the more serious piece. But Im damn sure mad at those rhyme schemes... Makes me feel insecure about myself....
I got all my votes in this week.
mih.... it went over peoples head's in think
Link Gash means getting pussy
the story was about a chronic masterbater
it wasn't your traditional diss
Nah, I got it lol, but it was still a silly topic choice, bro. Especially you know Nu dont play. I knew its a masterbatin dork(cal) fantisizin to porn all day long an your execution was flawless. I didnt know you could link raps like that lol
i link raps like cal links male butthole
^An for those of you who dont know... Thats no little thing lmao
Yo, you really impressed the shit out of me this week homeboy, real champ material.
Whats good with my match?
match ends in a tie
you're co-champs and have to battle in a three way with the contender
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