Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by xX_NASTY_Xx, May 31, 2009.
So it just started up?
lol fuck poetree
what are you guys talkin about a dissapointing week?
scatterbox just signed in, pain said he's stayin in
the motivation is there, you guys gotta step it up, read the top writers pieces an gain somethin from em an incorporate it into your own expierence. take the comments people leave on your verses an master em, make em work for you.
ive seen you guys losin week after week, but you are gettin better, you guys do have potential, an i think you playin yallselfs short on performance, its a state of mind thing, mind of matter, i think therefore i am, ya dig? confidence. confidence develops your style. creates your swagger.
You fellas aint no worse off then i was when i started out.
stay in the league, stay open minded. you think, therefore you are. confidence.
^all true but sometimes things just dont work out
i dunno what killed it for anyone else, but i tried to control my writing this week instead of just letting w/e pour out into my verse and it ended up kicken me in the ass.
i feel ya with 'you think an therefore are' tho
lol@kickin me in the ass
you right for feelin me on you think therefore you are, you got the kickin me in the ass mentality thats whats gone happen. but maybe if you adopt the kickin a lil ass mentality, thats whats gone happen.
an maybe to get the real genuine kickin ass mentality you should take a topic youd never write to, write something youd never write about it, take in all your feedback, take in all the top writers, maybe you really do kick ass.
Well, i'll probably just stay in the RSTl,RBl for now. I might even drop the RBl and just focus on the RSTL....
disappointing week as in with my verse i dropped...i'm not dropping this league..
This whole segment was on a whole different topic. lol. I like the passion you have for the RSTL though. lmao.
I mean at least I wasn't thinking about signing out, I was just asking about the poetry league.
lol i did that in the vid topic week, it wasnt my normal topic choice
but this all requires me to be able to control what im writing about instead of writing an seein what i have after
which im worken on haha
but yeah, i am swiching to ass kicking mentality, im determined to cop another win this week.
so if ApoGee doesn't show that's a wasted verse?
well its never a waste to get your practice in, firstly, ill still critique ya verse for ya, an secondly, if there are multiple no shows, we'll see if we cant get you guys paired off.
ok, that's all I want..some critique so I can keep improving.
Shiiiit, we all do.
Will be back to vote on all the battles tomorrow....
Troy, i was thinking of jus giving .ApoGee. and ext just to see if he shows to try and cut down no-shows. if thats ok with you, let me know. ima leave the thread open for him to post and if you're against it ill jus delete his verse
FW aint made up of pussies. We dont duck for easy wins, we stand up an lead em in
Seems like most everyone showed minus a select few.
Ladies an gentlemen, may I please direct your attention to the champ match?
No offense to blitz but lol@the votes. Seriously though. Can we get the writers that appreciate good story telling in to vote?
I appreciate good story telling, as well as good topicals...
I think Blitz just came extremely nice this week....
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