[RANKS] Week 8 Ranks and Lounge

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Mar 5, 2012.

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    1. Pent uP(6-0)
    2. Breathless(4-3)

    3. Kuja(6-1)
    4. ShadowWarriorfs(4-3)

    5. Patrown(1-0)
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  2. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    topics tonight or will they be up tomorrow? also lmk if i can still make suggestions for this week.. it was closed when i tried to throw some up, i got home late.
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  3. Kuja

    Kuja Jack Skellington

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    lol topics please ?
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  4. Shadow

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    working on it
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  5. patrown

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    ty shad. i like em.

    so is the illiuminati some new form of illuminati?
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    im feelin i hate to remember picture....
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  7. patrown

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    ..more misplaced rhyme.
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    damn... im so rusty... havent done anything in since like 05
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  9. patrown

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    dont trip homie u probably tryin too hard
    remember you just gotta let it flow homie, connect your brain to your hands and let some shit fly then f uck with it. u know!! it's like ridin a bike meign.
    when i come back, everytime i've learned thing's from listen ing
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  10. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    removed my spam :x
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  11. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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    i still got my eyes on this

    in a few weeks i should have the time to make a comeback....
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  12. patrown

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    damn. I would have had to drive two hours all together to get the rest of my verse. lucky dolla no showed.. gas is spensive.

    throwing up what else i had on that tomorrow. not that it matters, pure fuckery.
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    had a falling out with my lady sunday
    spent all week writing a letter to salvage the relationship
    last night she called me to talk things out.

    she left this morning...

    sorry about no-showing.
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  14. Kuja

    Kuja Jack Skellington

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    Im back so ill write up my verse .
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    ayo split... if tac lets u post man its fine with me.. PM him and sort things out
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  16. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    Really? Words like ev'rytime are wrote like that because that's how they are supposed to sound out loud
    And pent's heads'll... what, you're not a fan of contractions?
    seriously, you have some messed up critiques
    Saying a lot of my shit didn't rhyme rhyme, you obviously have no concept of phonetical rhymes
    Juat because it ain't "perfect rhymes" (hone, tone, bone, etc.) At the direct end of the lines doesn't it wasn't there


    When you don't understand audio, why even tell me I should've read through it to make it sound right (I do audio, everything sounds like it's supposed to)

    Did you read that last line as "ev ER ee" and "SUH posed"
    Or was it ev'ry and s'pos'd?

    I'll drop a quick accapella of this to show you you problems' solutions
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  17. Shadow

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    I read it how it was suppose to be read. Truth is, i don't like it, it's my opinion. not to mention everysingle isn't a word for one.

    Also, please explain how words like "fear" and "were" rhyme, or nearest and spirit (spirits, perhaps). don't get mad son
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  18. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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  19. Shadow

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    :funny: we're is one syllable, we were are two, You can't rhyme one syllable words with 2 like that. It doesn't work out well for you. If you have said we're. i wouldn't say anything but you didn't

    moving this to the lounge fyi

    Edit: also, we're equals we are, not we were
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  20. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    phonetical contraction
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