[RANKS] Week 6 Ranks and Lounge

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Feb 20, 2012.

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  1. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    I appreciate that man.
    I really, reeeeally took the time to look at every verse. I don't think anybody knew that omega wrote his as a satirical comedy... it was apparent after like 10 reads..
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  2. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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    just added you fb...

    as far as sim... well im not on aim right now
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  3. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    man, i dont know why yall can't run AIM. CK, coup... all yall think it's a big program or somethin...i keep that shit on.. bidness calls n shit..
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  4. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    fuck it :\ im posting out of turn. i free wrote this shit. it's ridiiiiculoous. no backspaces

    stripping our soul in a shower that scours like thiefs in slums
    equipiping control for the hour to the clock towers begun
    and the whole world of cowards sit and watch all my fun
    the clock strikes one as timing transmits thoughts to the sun
    so thoughts splice reminding atom why he brought eve his gun
    not one concise movement as fusion fuses illusions to bruises
    i choose this but the hoof prints of a muse lost in foolishness

    confuse mist to move since the fuse lit on my tomb hisses
    choosing to move inches to lose it to the gloom princess
    the temptress soon winces as eyes move across channels
    consuming the interest of the wise albatrosses and mammals
    the moon is the dusk that will rise with crosses and camels
    across the channel i rambled like a riptides guiding me on
    but im lost in the annals of sin hiding inside all along

    singing sing song patterns to saturn that earned me a shuttle
    bringing rings down for lanterns that turned the sea to a puddle

    guiding string cheese to fat chicks concerned to eat well
    the inviting breeze rode with tactics doing backflips to hell
    i dwell in a cell of myself looking for a shelf full of what else
    Elfs. I steal the bastards from santa clause, have to pause?
    they squeel and claw as last words through jaws gnawing slowly
    pawing at the ground feeling absurd to stop holding
    then grow moldy as the older they get the more rotten

    my closets filled with little green hats i score often
    my floors a coffin spilling spittle in a sheen like it's drooling
    explore the softening sour dribble that gleams when it's cooling
    to endure often we devour skittles fat beans then shits ruling


    ^^^??? every word rhyme. often we = softening. .. wtttfff. no backspace.
    beat it.
    free write. ftw.
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  5. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

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    Sweet drop but if you changed elfs to elk N stuck with the animal/hunter style u where working with incorperating the clock tower in as a school shooting it would have been dope.. Not fully original but dope none the less.. The end structure sick now use that to aid the story as well n that would b tight as fuck.. Nice drop anyways dude.. Keep up the good workm..
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  6. Kuja

    Kuja Jack Skellington

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    Dont have facebook lol, kinda dont like what it stands for so never used it. If its in regards for an interview or something then you will just have to pm me the questions.
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  7. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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    Kuja ... check your pm's....
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  8. Kuja

    Kuja Jack Skellington

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    Done and replyed ^
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  9. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    So.....i'm pretty bored soooooooo forgive the verse i'm about to write.
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  10. Kuja

    Kuja Jack Skellington

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    =-) behave shad .
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  11. the omega man

    the omega man so, it goes

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    [​IMG] Yeah, ya boy thuggin ya heard me lol...Omega and SP the Ghost...can't get no iller or realer than that...
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  12. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    lol @ T.a.C praying Defcon no shows.
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  13. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    man i really do apologize i don't know why i keep thinking the due date is friday and normally i'm on and will see it say thursday on thursday and drop but i been so damn busy this week and hopped on tonight to ask for an extention..if it's possible i can drop like really early in the morning..if not then i do apologize and will sign in again for next week.
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  14. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    i'm sure T.a.C doesn't mind if u take a 24hr extension. I certainly don't mind lol
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  15. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    =) if you post in your matches thread and receive no response there's an automatic extension . you're ok bud. but keep shooting for friday..
    last minute hasn't worked out for me.
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  16. TheInkwell

    TheInkwell New Member

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    lol [this is here to meet the character requirements -.-]
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  17. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    first time ill be doin a drop in one night.
    shaking my damn head.
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  18. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    man, doyen better not noshow. doesn't seem like the way of an "11x champ"
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  19. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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  20. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    if Def shows, he wins. im about to sign out. just not feeling it right now.
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