Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by xX_NASTY_Xx, May 11, 2009.
but seriously, you're telling me that girl in the middle doesn't look dumb?
lol, probably. shes beautiful though, not sayin all beautiful girls are dumb, but if guys are gonna love you no matter what you do, theres not much insentive to educate yourself. then of course, youre not smart enough to realize that one day youre gonna be ugly an stupid an everyones gonna hate you. but id ravish those girls 4 way style lol
blah. the girl in the middle is not even attractive to me. but oh well.
^^^yea I figured that...
I guess some guys need to fuck smart-looking girls. Good skin and big breasts can't cut it sometimes. You're probably into porn where the girl is a school-teacher wearing glasses. Instead of "fuck me with your big cock"...you like to hear "penetrate me with your elongated phallus!".......
Hey, we all have our fetishes. Some guys can only fuck fat girls; some guys can only fuck midgets; some guys can only fuck chickens. You like intellectuals.
The dumber they are, the quicker they fuck...
Half as intelligent, therefore, twice as likely to filate me.
joro ill post ny verse as soon as i finished it
she doesn't have to look smart. but she can't look dumb. normal is more like it. the two bitches around her don't look smart, but they look much better than the chick in the middle.
i guess i'm more mature than everyone in this thread. i don't fuck anything walking. sex is a dangerous game, gentlemen. trust me.
^^yea if you have sex you might fall in love....I understand you Q.
And falling in love with a dumb girl is especially dangerous.
Q was falsly accused of rape, so he is a little bit jaded when it comes to this topic.
All the girls I've fucked have never denied their willingness, so me, not so jaded...
Joro nice verse playa it floored me ur connection to biblical stories.
ill be votin tommorow yall gotta work again then its my dudes 20th.
smokin some green crack :O
is anyone thuroughly fucked up by the fact i posted titty pics to stop an argument
and it just started a new one?
what the fuck!!!
i second that
^Your voting got better this week. Try to include more criticism though (at least for me).
I don't know about ya'll, but I'm tryin' to grow as a writer...
will do....the more i voted this week the more criticism i gave...i feel ya on the better writer thing...
GUTTSO: When I criticized your verse, I quoted it and pointed out inconsistencies...I explained my opinion of it. I know I hurt your gentle heart, cuz you came into my battle and just talked shit about my verse. You didn't give no explanation for your opinion.
For instance, you said my verse was "unoriginal". So you mean to tell me you've heard or read a verse before where the writer is begging God not to destroy the earth becuz of sexual misbehavior?
You were obviously hating. I dissected your verse and exposed it, and that made you cry inside, so you came and talked shit on mine. But your little bitch behavior undermines the integrity of the league. The league has no integrity if people are voting against other people cuz of how that person voted on their own battle.
If the MOD's were smart they'd give you an automatic loss this week, if not ban your emotional little girl ass.
You should go back into my thread and criticize my verse intelligently, illustrating how and why you arrived at your opinion. If you can.
Thank you, I appreciate your feedback, I even gave you some rep for it. Some of my verse you did not get. Which is understandable, and fine by me. Everybody is entitled to their view and that should be appreciated.
You're wrong, you didn't hurt my feelings at all. You're opinion is cool by me dude. I didn't come into your battle and talk shit about your verse, I was commenting on how shit I thought it was. Which is my view.
Yeah I guess I am guilty of not breaking down the verses as much as I could have this week, because I have been fairly busy, and the RSTL unfortunately hasn't been on the top of my priority list. Don't shed tears over it though, you'll get through this man, it'll be fine. I'll even dedicate 5 minutes of my time just for you this evening to develop my feedback.
Well I don't really like your internet persona that much. I didn't see a problem in making that clear.
The way you dissected my verse was pretty cool man. But there were a few things I disagreed with, BUT not gonna argue about them in this thread. If you really want to discuss it I can send you a PM sometime. Coz don't wanna be influencing votes and the like. You know that concept of projection you were talking about a while ago? I think there is a case of it here, because I don't recall crying inside. I'll be the man here and apologise if I hurt your feelings.
I guess people can make their own minds up about that. But all I say is that I am a pretty amicable guy, not really my style to stir up shit and run my mouth acting like the big I am. I've been a consistent voter whenever I've been active in the league and have always given my honest opinion. So see it how you wanna see it. It's not me who has the problem here...
If needs must and the majority agree then that's fine, I'll step down. At the end of the day you're the bitch here and the starting point to all the silly slag fights in the league at the moment.
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