Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by xX_NASTY_Xx, May 4, 2009.
or, mods can move the posts to the ranks thread. its that simple.
Q, follow the rules nig.
in the rules we have to give a breakdown and then some ppl are gettin upset over the breakdown. if you dont like what someone said then either adjust your next drop or say 'fuck it, im doing this for me an it doesnt matter'
i might not like to hear what some have to say about my drop, but the fact is im extremly new to writing somthen out on a topic an i got a lot of improvement to do. i dont care how long anyones been at this, if someone isnt critizing your verse your not tryin hard enough.
also, posting on the net will result in negative feedback, dont let it get to you.
T.a.C can I just dump my voting links here or something? Since my
thread is closed and there isnt a no show/skunk thread I cant post em
i voted on a few, lmk if you want links or if you want to tickle my taint or w/e's clever since you closed my thread as well.
Not feeling someones drop is one thing, i can deal with that, but claimin' biting or someone ghostin shit for a fuckin website text league, thats low rent...
If you claimin foul on someones shit it should be done here too, not somewhere that you can make an accusation and the accused can't argue the point...
And fuck a rule i'll argue anywhere on the net, i pay Verizon for the right to do so...
I said the ellipsis slashes thing was just a silly detail.
Like I said, not only were the rhyme patterns completely different, but so was the overall style.
Just take the rhyme patterns, why go from multies to singles in 16's for no apparent reason, except maybe to fuck up the flow of your verse?
The first verse was very well written, the second verse, not so much. Nobody can switch from good to suck that quickly.
It's not illegal for a reason. Mainly because most people don't give a shit. I've ghosted for people in the league, a lot of people have ghosted in the league. Sometimes you really just don't feel like writing. Sometimes you aren't inspired enough to finish something.
All I said was make it less obvious.
And to everyone talking about criticisms, that's how I became a decent writer. By people telling me what I was doin' wrong, where I should improve, and so on and so forth.
Going from writing like this
to the shit I wrote this week didn't happen by magic. You should listen to what we're telling you, and I know I'd appreciate the same from you guys. Telling me how dope my verse was doesn't help me at all as a writer...
soull and GL? post in here
[Week 5] [Championship] C. MC Guttso (4-0) vs. 2. Ace the Prophet (3-1)(VOTE!)
[Week 5] 17. liquid' acid (0-0) vs 18. ShadowWarriorfs (0-0)(VOTE)
[Week 5] 15. Joro (2-0) vs 16. Nick Names (0-0)(VOTE!)
[Week 5] 7. Discreet (1-0) vs 8. .ain:. (3-1)(VOTE!)
[Week 5] 19. eye-rime (0-0) vs 20. Orange407County (0-0)(VOTE!)
Kind of is a big deal when you claim so vigorously that i did it, when im sitting here telling you i didn't, like you said it isnt illegal, if i did it, i'd say so, but why go through the trouble of having someone write a verse for ME, for the fuckin' RSTL?!
I got heated because your arguement was flimsy to begin with, fuckin' how dare you in the first place? "no wait, i know" fuck outta here Kyle, you don't know shit...
Fact still remains, your an ignorant ma'fucka, yea, dots and slashes, nobody ever in the history of the internet switched styles in mid battle, this nigga must be getting help from somewhere...
"Make it less obvious next time", lmao, yea aight man...
there's my 5 links.
all i can say is that the level of competition in the RSTL has declined severely.
^stfu who are you? what kind of lame complains about how someone spaces out his verse.
Its too humble to simply be happy that mafuckaz is actually signing up and showing, way to humble...
The coo thing to do would be to take shots at the league as a whole, nevermind the fact niggaz allow us to read they shit, but talk down to em because it aint 2001 anymore and you miss it so much, thats whats hot...
4 x RSTL Champ
Champ of Season 2
3rd Most Wins in RSTL History
Most Hated 2 Years Running
No one did awards for '08...
The real question is, who the fuck are you chump.
Thing is GL, this is just sport (to niggaz who got lives n shit).
The fact that you posted up your text battle record like some university degrees to show you are somebody....makes you a lame.
LMFAO ur pathetic ur father must be proud of you
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