Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Jul 25, 2011.
Shad, why am I thinking the verse you just posted was a break through moment for you ?
no idea tbh but i was very disappointed with the battle i just read...
what battle did you just read ?
I haven't read priest's verse yet, but I expect to see the same outcome shad.
This isn't spoken word, but spoken word still rhymes unless there are clear breaks for an effective pause.
When posting a wall of text you can't deliver that effect and you have to take that into account when you're writing in the RSTL. Using the excuse of it doesn't have to rhyme doesn't mean that you can perpetually avoid having any flow and rhyme scheme in your verse without any depth of content and thinking it'll fly.
Got Life ? why recycle ?
gl? saw it
Coup what does your name mean?
i just read some of those "lyric" topics and i have to say that when you dont know the gravity of sin, life, and your outlook on it, is different... it's even deep at times... cus in that state, when i was younger, i prophesied a part of my life.
to be fair i edited my sig with old and latest meterial
you are welcome to bash me lol
[closes eyes to brace for impact]
Herp derp derp.
what does he mean by busted?....^i read that reply before you edited it...sorry, i'm lost
Shadow - Definitely agree. that's my first Story/Topical since I was in the league years ago, but I'm happy with it.
GL? and I do not have to get a room!
As far as 270? Fuck dude. When the Apes come, I've been able to stock up on my artillery for a few years. I have 2 handguns, 2 rifles, and a shotgun. So I'm good.
'n whether you think that the battle I'm in with Obsent and LP isn't worth anything or whatever, fact of the matter is - ALL 3 OF US POSTED ON TIME so fuck my dick, asshole.
All these Extensions - every battle has one. It's kind of stupid. I can't wait until Vern and CK are signed up. They have integrity.
Between my muscles and your artillery we're good to go brotha.
didnt realise cig had asked for an extension.
I seemed like everyone did...I'm gonna try to vote on GL/Bent's match now....i have to leave real soon so i may need to wait til later
i thought it was funny how i trolled everyone into thinkin i was gonna post late.. but posted on time..
I thought it was funny how you're a mod of the RSTL.
holy shit Resilient has alot of guns..
Hook it up, yo.
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