[RANKS] Week 47 Ranks/Predictions/Lounge

Discussion in 'Rapmusic.com Battle League' started by Quriosity, Mar 15, 2009.

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  1. Quriosity

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    there's a lot of newbies, including both of you. i wouldn't consider either of you vets. a vet is measured by what you've done, not how long you've done it.

    and that line you posted is not good. but i'll be glad to break down both battles thoroughly later on. trust me.

    in other news, i posted 40 as promised.
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  2. Diso.

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    fuck newbs
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  3. Jordan Robinson

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    ill work with that.
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  4. Quriosity

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    that's a much better attitude.

    by the way, what does your signature say? is that "blind eye" because all i get on my screen is blind and an ampersand symbol.
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  5. Jordan Robinson

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    no your seeing it correct. thats exactly whut i was aiming for.

    it doesnt metaphor out to be blind eye or nothing tho.
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  6. Quriosity

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    its not really newbie votes though. the term is generally used to refer to the opinion of a voter. discreet's vote, though he is a newbie, would be better described as just a bad vote or a short vote or a quick vote. but as far as opinion matters, he seems to agree with the other 5.
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  7. Jordan Robinson

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    seriously, without any make up... i just like the way the symbol looks at the end of the word blind.
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  8. Quriosity

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    i thought it was maybe a wingdings symbol or something of an eye that my browser just didn't detect.
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  9. Jordan Robinson

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    the other 5 votes look copy and pasted lol
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  10. T.a.C

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    honestly jordan, and this is no disrespect to you or anything, but from what ive seen you are the WORST voter in the league. it always seems like youre voting for the person who loses.
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  11. Light Saber

    Light Saber I LoVe AsiaN ChicKs

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    Reall good stop swaying votes...

    and Q, i'll punch you in the eyebrow
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  12. Quriosity

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    lol, sure thing.
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  13. Mr. Anti-Biter

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    its funny how eggo mentioned Ren and yet he seems fishy himself. he's prolly ren him damn self since we had all forgotten about that flipper by now


    sintro used it in this battle. click here

    suite wordplay has been used even before sintro did. but those are the only two times i seen it like that.. and its pretty close imo. i dont know.. just throwing it out there
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  14. Quriosity

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    voted.
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  15. Quriosity

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    voted.
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  16. Jordan Robinson

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    I couldnt stop laughing by that point... the way you deliver criticism with brute force just went from taking you seriously then to laughing for a while then back to serious again. but i do agree with you on my grammar and wording, but that would take english classes to improve. which aint a bad idea... but unlikely.
    and i see how that line actually blows now, but thought the concept was decent in a simplistic way.

    And Ya Lady Game so terrible. Gurls switch teams Rapidly,
    Ted House a transvestite walkout. the way he makes gurls more Randy

    since this was the only line you in some sort a bad way shed some light on,
    lemme see if i can make this a lil better for approval using your advice.
    im not trying to defend anything here... just experimenting with your
    grammar tips. and FYI im using the word Randy in a metaphorical way.
    boys name/sexual-horny.

    Your lady game is so terrible that gurls switch teams rapidly,
    Ted houses transvestites the way he makes gurls more randy

    with that switch, the set up gets lost. but it still makes sense if your not being over critical. but lets see...


    teds such as bitch, he makes women seem more manly,
    then sex-change . (and i have no idea how to incorporate the Randy concept)

    if i anyone can show me an example of how to make this solid i can greatly improve from it.

    ---- this post is gon kill me next week ----
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  17. Quriosity

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    the only way to make it solid is to scrap it. the whole randy concept is retarded. its not even a concept. randy as in a boys name/sexual-horny. what the fuck is that? just scrap it. and my advice wasn't necessarily geared towards rewording that line to make it solid but just pointing out that the wording was also terrible among other things. random periods imply pauses which ruins the flow when no long pause is needed. also, sacrificing grammar like the house shit ruins the impact of the line in many ways. the wordplay is less effective and impressive and the line tends to make less sense. if you must do these things to make a line connect or to make sense, then you should abort mission. its that simple.
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  18. Jordan Robinson

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    teds such as bitch, he makes women seem more manly,
    then sex-change

    can anyone finish this line tho ? with or without using the word randy..

    i just want to see a punchline ... any takers
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  19. Quriosity

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    there is no punchline there. don't you get it?
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  20. Jordan Robinson

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    yeah im starting to figuer that out...
    i just went thru a folder of concepts i had and most of em dont hold wieght.

    one more thing.

    Ya verses got stand up…. Take a seat, find a floor, and lay down
    His Punches hit and get miss‘d, a case of rihanna and chris brown,

    i think this is sick... and i know you disagree, so
    let me tell you why, and then you can you tell me how wack it is in a minute. lol

    his verses got stand up, sit down blah blah blah
    ^ as in you get into it... but then start sleeping on it.

    hit and get miss'd relating to that fact.
    chris brown-rhianna relating to hit and miss.

    ...
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