Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Jul 18, 2011.
i'm glad you showed up, Bent. i was worried last night when i saw you didn't post yet x.x
i dont know what to say
now i do but dont think i should explain because it might throw off your writing. in short, dont clown me because you are more blessed poetically than i.
anyone fancy giving me some feedback anyway so i don't feel like such a loser? other than resilient, cheers mate.
i'll give you feedback once you go vote.
well, fuck. there's a dilemma.
oh nomsy <3.
oh fuck, didn't realise votes were actually due on the sunday. thought that, the way things had been playing out recently, they were due by monday night. i'll get on with that then.
They are due Monday night Nomsy...you have until t.a.c closes them, which is monday nowadays
VOTES DUE: Every Sunday @ 11:59 PM PST
i have no idea what pst is. but i hear that is about 6am monday morning for me. anyway, nearly done voting. out of the kindness of my heart.
Lol no one here follows the rules nomsy
yea but people are lame and don't seem to like voting on sunday.
well, fuck. well i've voted on four and i'm going to bed. if anyone i have voted on could return the favour that'd be stellar. as i missed one battle to vote on you can deduct that from my battle with bingo. cheers.
I'll give you feedback tomorrow....thanks for the kind words Nom, I'll work on that as well!
I can't wait to humble the entire league once the tourney starts.
shut the fuck up already.
i wasn't gone for that long.
lol @ lp hiding his emotions the first three responses.
but dead @ him claiming america.
Stellar feedback in all your votes Coup!
The approach you took is positive and beneficial.
That's how you uplift.
LPree I can't believe I took all the votes man...that's brutal for you. This is what you need to do. Make each of your bars about 11-12 syllables. That way if forces your structure to be complient and neat...you have to do this man. IF you would have you would of took all the votes.
i just re read my vote on your match coup. only just realised how horrible it came across. i did actually like your verse. no harm meant.
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