[RANKS] Week 44 Ranks and Lounge

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Jun 27, 2011.

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    was it necessary to say it three times? who the fuck are you? mike jones?
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  2. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    LMAO! for effect..
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  3. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    naw triple post on accident
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  4. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    "I'm Mike Jones
    Who?
    Mike Jones
    The only and only, you cant clone me
    got a lotta haters and a lot of homeys
    some friends and some phoneys
    back then hoes didnt want me
    now im hot hoes all on me
    back then hoes didnt want me
    now im hot hoes all on me
    back then hoes didnt want me
    now im hot hoes all on me
    back then hoes didnt want me
    now im hot hoes all on me
    back then hoes didnt want me
    now im hot hoes all on me
    back then hoes didnt want me
    now im hot hoes all on me
    back then hoes didnt want me
    now im hot hoes all on me
    back then hoes didnt want me
    now im hot hoes all on me
    back then hoes didnt want me
    now im hot hoes all on me
    back then hoes didnt want me
    now im hot hoes all on me
    back then hoes didnt want me
    now im hot hoes all on me
    back then hoes didnt want me
    now im hot hoes all on me
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  5. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    TaC you improved to a point, but you're very stagnant and I don't see the creativity in your writing that others have applauded you for. To me it's very generic, but then again I can't remember the last time I read a verse in the RSTL and was like "wow, that's clever."

    @Priest, i'm glad that your pussy is soaking now that I'm here and all, but if you could clean that shit up as it's smelling like a tuna sammich up in the bitch.

    Don't go bragging about winning on a technicality or about how all you do is keystyle. Pain and I both have never spent more than 1/2 an hour on a verse (which includes the proof read after writing it).

    Some people can write quality in a short amount of time, other people like yourself use the lack of time spent as an excuse for providing mediocre verses.
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  6. ikon211

    ikon211 Member

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    speaking of coup.... just talked to em... he said he's sorry for leaving unannounced (about doing the Mag or something?) anyway he also said he has to much shame to re-join RSTL after what he did :/ damn...
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  7. fairydance2000

    fairydance2000 don't wait, Procrastinate

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    heres a question for you Got life, if you only spend 1/2 hr on your verse and you think its the shit, why dont you try spending more time on it and dropping something really nice?????? it seems you spend more time slagging people on here than you do on your verses, hmmm is that where the pleassure is for you here?????
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  8. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    lol im not gonna lie it can take a while sometimes to write my verses.

    A nigga be doing cross-references and indepth research and shit lol

    lol Mike Jones is one of the greatest rapping minds of the last 300 years

    Got a lot of haters and a lot of homies..

    Some friends and some PHONIES

    Cmon man that is lyricism par excellance (sic)

    oh shit I just thought of a swagger line for text

    I'm (sic) like you spelled my name wrong lol

    Don't nobody jack that its copywritten

    [​IMG]
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  9. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    how can i improve on that, in your opinion?
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  10. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    lol. love that cube line. "i aint mike jones, keep my name out your mouth bitch"

    i wont lie, he had a couple songs i had on my ipod for a while.

    and im jacking your line sucka.

    fuck a stone cold, taker >
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  11. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

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    heres a couple of gotlifes beautifully poetic and highly intelligent bars:

    He lathered his hands cleansing them with soap,
    Finally ready he takes the metallic corded rope,
    Walking into the room, moving forward he chokes-
    The man before him, Dylan’s bitter heart elopes

    Nice the main characters heart got married :)

    She lay there weak and sobbing,
    While this freak stayed throbbing,
    Quenching his unspeakable desire,
    To weld their bodies in the fire-

    A grade weld bodies in fire - hot as all hell

    When she asked me about God's omnipotence,
    She was a teen amongst the facades and significance,

    Damn if only my rhyming dictionary worked with omnipotence

    la la la extension.
    i'm filled with nervous tension.

    Truthfully these are the best bars you've written in years, because not only do they rhyme, they're multi-syllable and they make sense

    See you in the tourny my little toadstool..
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  12. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    u have yet to prove any of my bar's are mediocre so unless u can do that, these pussy juices r gonna stay!

    smell me!?
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  13. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    ^^^ LMAO

    and the CK post had me rolling. wow

    that said, GL?s topical this week is real hot
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  14. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    CK, I think it's cute that you're talking, but riddle me this, when have you ever beaten me?

    TaC, the only way you'll really ever improve the creativity of your writing is by expanding your mind. Maybe read some books, watch some obscure movies, find inspiration in something that will get your creative juices flowing in the same way that priest's pussy seemingly does 24/7.

    One thing I never stop doing is reading more and more literature because it expands my mind/vocab. Also I like to watch obscure indie flicks as they tend to be more on the creative rather than mainstream side.
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  15. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    I'lll take that as a compliment :scared:

    Tell that nigga Coup that AIN'T no bad feeling's it's 100 percent between us.. and when he's ready and stop's bein' a scurry cat to get back up in here! his position is open if he return's..


    OH... and to the rest of the league

    :fu:

    :funny:
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  16. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    Coup should return.

    I never got a chance to face him.
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  17. ikon211

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    every battle we had this week was good... i'm voting tomorrow....
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  18. TheInkwell

    TheInkwell New Member

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    no it wasn't, my verse is pretty embarrassing. >.< but for what its worth, at least i didn't noshow
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  19. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    if our battle was "good" then your standards for a good battle are shit.

    you're a joke.
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  20. ikon211

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    umm..... how do I say this right.... :finger:
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