[RANKS] Week 26 Ranks and Lounge

Discussion in 'Rapmusic.com Battle League' started by Tacky Jones, Mar 19, 2012.

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  1. Circleplex

    Circleplex New Member

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    mayn you think ryan dunn lines are fresh? you fucking serious?

    BWAHAHAHA

    ur verse was unorgiional badly worded garbage

    fucking bitching like a faggot, man up
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  2. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    b/c that was an actual punchline that why? how was my verse unoriginal or badly worded point it out so i can elevate..

    i promise that i dont agree with nothing yawl are sayin but i also promise this if yawl be so kind to really give me a critique that is helpfull then i can fix what i did wrong..


    tbh.. ima give a break down on this battle after votes are up.. and see what parts im wrong at and what parts yawl are wrong at...
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  3. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    I'm sorta wondering about the way people vote, I mean gee had it right, my opener and closer was nice but the rest was sorta blah, I wanna know when and how quoting a couple random lines equates to a vote, and the lines of mine quoted were the worst of what I had. Don't get me wrong, I know jai took it, but she did go over the bar limit that she herself set, let alone my 12, like priest said, constructive criticism is welcome if its actually constructive.
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  4. Circleplex

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    fuck you mean it was na actual punchline? ryan dunn lines been played out and terrible, seen like 10 of them in live battles and shit not even counting text.

    "I'ma pull his G-card only time he thuggin' during e-life
    take the 'Will' out
    you aint hard, but you spit gun bars, & u call ur self a G.. Y?"

    fck does this even mean mayne? take the will out his names gee ikers. that dont make G...Y you rain man ass clown.

    "fucking factz, Truth is in text LP can be mean as hell
    sibling rivalry when I Drown my sister in the well.
    Mother said, to brother while drawing water,
    lookin' @ me "Gee, it's hard to raise a daughter.""

    nigga nobody gives a fuck if you drowned yo sister. you rhymed hell with well wtf this aint 1970 take off the parachute pants. last 2 bars dont even fucking make sense. just cus you say gee dont mean its relevent to anything.

    "butt fuck the jokes ain't got no time for no 'gay' shit!!
    you gettin jacked this week n'otherwords u gettin str8 ripped!"

    aight, first just cus you say butt fuck and gay shit dont mean anything. sides the fact you can butt fuck a girl, it dont mean anything. rhyming about how your going to win without sayin anythign which makes it look like you can win is pointless. "u gettin str8 ripped" aint a punchline. if that was a setup it migth eb half decent but it aint a punchline.

    "veto ur acceptance like a president "

    fuck does that even mean? what acceptance? veto what?

    "everything i writes blessed
    these verses should be in the new testament"

    THAT WAS YOUR PUNCHLINE? btw new testement was made in the fucking sand age they aint adding new shit

    "Peep what im writin' son....
    try swervin in my lane and u gone die like Ryann Dun"

    played out, terrible setup.

    i aint even hating on you, but you fucking bitching about losing like a soft ass bitch. man the fuck up
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  5. Circleplex

    Circleplex New Member

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    ama send you an invoice for my time btw pm me your billin address i dont do this shit for free
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  6. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Circle pretty much said it all, but I'll message you on Facebook with my breakdown tonight/tomorrow
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  7. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    Gee willikers name is also Gee willy.. so that's how i set up the G... why Gee Lies. line..

    and when i said veto ur acceptance like a president.. i guess it was a lil immaturely worded but i was referring to how a president vetos bills.. and in this case G was tryin to be accepted by the rest of the league.. in which i denied it.. like a president.. and when i said that shit about the new testatment. i mean that's called wordplay and shit.. not a haymaker punchline but it does go with the concept. and as far as im aware punchlins are based of word similarities so when i said BUTT FUCK THE GAY SHIT .. u getting "straight" ripped.. i mean idk how that doesn't resonate. yawl stupid or someting if u ask me
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  8. Circleplex

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    the new testement shit wasnt worpdlay at all you dumb fuck. its saying "these verse should be in that book". tahts not fucking wordplay its a weak setup you used as a punchline.

    nah, just saying butt fuck gay shit and straight doesnt make it a punchline. thats not what a punchline is hust cus you have 3 words which somehow aparently have something to do with each other. it wasnt close to a punchline and everybody can see that.
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  9. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    :jaydamn: @ rain man assclown... yeeesh.
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  10. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    :jaydamn: @ rain man assclown... yeeesh.
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  11. tbone

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    damn i would like my verse to be broke down to...lol
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  12. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    thanx bro.
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  13. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    too drunk. will do this in the morning. sorry guys.
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  14. Brown Jesus

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    I agree. But, you should have asked for 1 out of 5 votes, since 1/5*0=0. A deals a deal!!

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  16. Gee Wilikers

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    Take the criticism lightly LP its a text based internet battle league who gives a fuck.
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