[RANKS] Week 22 Ranks and Lounge

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Jan 24, 2011.

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  1. Shadow

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    it's verses like that which make me miss GL's votes
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  2. Tacky Jones

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    if i was voting i wouldnt even bother to read it. id jus go on a two line rant about how stupid he is
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  3. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    woulda been great
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  4. Shadow

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    i was tempted but i thought to myself, "hey made it will turn out well" it didn't....it just flopped.....so hard


    and he wants us to respect it? seriously?
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  5. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    cant knock the creativity

    can knock the stupidity
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  6. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    you nigga's is some bitch made nigga's u can't even respect ones creativity.. if you can't find the creative connection and see the creative transitions from pic to pic and how i formed a story about the world facing mass war. how it's affected him his wife his family telescoping from him to the whole world being destroyed and rebuilt all using the crappy pictures you presented us with

    if anything shad your retarded for posting those worthless piece of shit pictures.

    i mean come on a chore to read?

    its like a fucking story book even a kid could read that shit and be entertained

    and at least im comfortable to step outta my shell and be bold with my creative expression. U and TACS shit is the same week in week out.

    so please save the senseless act tryna make me look/sound dumb. is that supposed to make u look sound better? you are by far the biggest tumor i've dealt with on RM.. shaddow FUCK YOU! you cock stank ass bitch! you think ur so cool over there with ur rstl magezine and ur mod position. but i think ur a chump. and i don't respect ur vote at all.. and t.a.c. i wouldn't expect anything else different outta u. ur an asshole so i really don't give a fuck.

    anyways go fucc ur self bitch ass nigga!
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  7. Shadow

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    Don't blame me because you are retarded. How would you possibly think your story is good? you put 27 pictures in a 64 line verse..i'm not even sure it was 64 lines.
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  8. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    shads a bitch ass nigga! no wonder his baby mama left him for some one else

    nigga you have no respect, you can't approach art with out ur pretentious bias mentallity bc u have no real creative talent. HOW LONG DID IT TAKE FOR YOU TO LEARN HOW TO WRITE YOUR BASIC STORIES? your rhymes aren't even impressive, YOU HAVE STORIES! u have perfected the art of story telling.. but what have u advanced ? u still write the same way every week. always about a womans perspective. bc u a bitch

    BITCH!
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  9. Shadow

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    I even called you a talented writer but hey...throw your hissy fit dude and sit in your room and be mad...hell if i care
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  10. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    nigga that don't make me retarded u gay ass faggot

    if anything u retarded bc u found it a chore to read 1-4 lines between each picture

    either u approached my shit, with the mind state of fuck LP. or u have a mechanical mentality concerning creativity.

    u fuckin robot ass nigga!
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  11. Shadow

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    lol i beat you though right lol
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  12. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    nigga i ain't even that mad, it's ur stupidity that makes me look like i am passionatly engaged in this arguement. just bc i said fuck u don't mean im over here suffering bc u didnt respect my shit. i used to respect u nigga.. now i don't give a fuck if u live or die
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  13. Shadow

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    :funny:
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  14. Shadow

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    you mad as hell dude :funny:

    Go home and masturbate to your hermaphrodite wife who refuses to touch you :funny:
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  15. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    yes u beat me shad. u fuckin sick fuck, DO U FEEL LIKE U ACHIEVED SOMETHING? u to bitch made to bring any creativity to this league bc all u care about is basic mechanics, you don't even acknowledge abstract expression, or different styles.u alway on this, corrective grammar/word usage. story telling guideline bullshit. idgaf if i win or lose, but i ain't goin no where ho! and u gone have to read my wack ass shit week in week out unless u choose not too. so eat a dick u fuckin loser
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  16. Tacky Jones

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    saying a child could read and be entertained by your verse is never a good thing, first off


    second, like i said, cant knock your creativity, but that was fuckin stupid. nobody wants to see all those fuckin pictures


    and if you've advanced and done so much, why dont you win? why do you have a losing record?
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  17. Shadow

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    :funny:

    i think i struck a nerve. i love how you whine when votes don't go your way
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  18. Tacky Jones

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    i saw a meltdown on the horizon when he said he was getting frustrated
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  19. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    bc i fucking suck
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  20. Riot

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    LP, I appreciate you on the fact of stepping out of the box of

    Norm, and I did see the connection in your verse, pic by pic.

    But, what I also did was copy and pasted your verse, minus

    The pics, and read it that way, reason being, yes it was creative

    But failed miserably, because reading it WITHOUT the pictures

    Just didn't work. Also, the flow was off again buddy.

    I told you last week, STOP trying so hard. Go back

    To the basics. Again, not being a dick, but read your verse

    Without the pics and tell me what you think.

    Don't tell me "well the pictures is what makes it"

    Pics are for support, small ingredient.

    Not hating.

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