Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Jan 24, 2011.
it's verses like that which make me miss GL's votes
if i was voting i wouldnt even bother to read it. id jus go on a two line rant about how stupid he is
woulda been great
i was tempted but i thought to myself, "hey made it will turn out well" it didn't....it just flopped.....so hard
and he wants us to respect it? seriously?
cant knock the creativity
can knock the stupidity
you nigga's is some bitch made nigga's u can't even respect ones creativity.. if you can't find the creative connection and see the creative transitions from pic to pic and how i formed a story about the world facing mass war. how it's affected him his wife his family telescoping from him to the whole world being destroyed and rebuilt all using the crappy pictures you presented us with
if anything shad your retarded for posting those worthless piece of shit pictures.
i mean come on a chore to read?
its like a fucking story book even a kid could read that shit and be entertained
and at least im comfortable to step outta my shell and be bold with my creative expression. U and TACS shit is the same week in week out.
so please save the senseless act tryna make me look/sound dumb. is that supposed to make u look sound better? you are by far the biggest tumor i've dealt with on RM.. shaddow FUCK YOU! you cock stank ass bitch! you think ur so cool over there with ur rstl magezine and ur mod position. but i think ur a chump. and i don't respect ur vote at all.. and t.a.c. i wouldn't expect anything else different outta u. ur an asshole so i really don't give a fuck.
anyways go fucc ur self bitch ass nigga!
Don't blame me because you are retarded. How would you possibly think your story is good? you put 27 pictures in a 64 line verse..i'm not even sure it was 64 lines.
shads a bitch ass nigga! no wonder his baby mama left him for some one else
nigga you have no respect, you can't approach art with out ur pretentious bias mentallity bc u have no real creative talent. HOW LONG DID IT TAKE FOR YOU TO LEARN HOW TO WRITE YOUR BASIC STORIES? your rhymes aren't even impressive, YOU HAVE STORIES! u have perfected the art of story telling.. but what have u advanced ? u still write the same way every week. always about a womans perspective. bc u a bitch
I even called you a talented writer but hey...throw your hissy fit dude and sit in your room and be mad...hell if i care
nigga that don't make me retarded u gay ass faggot
if anything u retarded bc u found it a chore to read 1-4 lines between each picture
either u approached my shit, with the mind state of fuck LP. or u have a mechanical mentality concerning creativity.
u fuckin robot ass nigga!
lol i beat you though right lol
nigga i ain't even that mad, it's ur stupidity that makes me look like i am passionatly engaged in this arguement. just bc i said fuck u don't mean im over here suffering bc u didnt respect my shit. i used to respect u nigga.. now i don't give a fuck if u live or die
you mad as hell dude
Go home and masturbate to your hermaphrodite wife who refuses to touch you
yes u beat me shad. u fuckin sick fuck, DO U FEEL LIKE U ACHIEVED SOMETHING? u to bitch made to bring any creativity to this league bc all u care about is basic mechanics, you don't even acknowledge abstract expression, or different styles.u alway on this, corrective grammar/word usage. story telling guideline bullshit. idgaf if i win or lose, but i ain't goin no where ho! and u gone have to read my wack ass shit week in week out unless u choose not too. so eat a dick u fuckin loser
saying a child could read and be entertained by your verse is never a good thing, first off
second, like i said, cant knock your creativity, but that was fuckin stupid. nobody wants to see all those fuckin pictures
and if you've advanced and done so much, why dont you win? why do you have a losing record?
i think i struck a nerve. i love how you whine when votes don't go your way
i saw a meltdown on the horizon when he said he was getting frustrated
bc i fucking suck
LP, I appreciate you on the fact of stepping out of the box of
Norm, and I did see the connection in your verse, pic by pic.
But, what I also did was copy and pasted your verse, minus
The pics, and read it that way, reason being, yes it was creative
But failed miserably, because reading it WITHOUT the pictures
Just didn't work. Also, the flow was off again buddy.
I told you last week, STOP trying so hard. Go back
To the basics. Again, not being a dick, but read your verse
Without the pics and tell me what you think.
Don't tell me "well the pictures is what makes it"
Pics are for support, small ingredient.
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