[RANKS] Week 2 Ranks and Lounge

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Jan 23, 2012.

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  1. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    yup. few luxury's are as therapeutic.. but I respect that.
    we'll be here.
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  2. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    good morning RSTLers, working through a small writers block :p but I think I got it figured out. 14 lines done and things are looking great :)
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  3. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA Well-Known Member

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    :wave: Good morning to all of you too..
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  4. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    awww Gal, I'm happy to see you here :)you're always so happy and pleasant :p
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  5. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    please allow alternates for no shows. :p
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  6. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA Well-Known Member

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    Ty, nO gOoD! ...my 1st time "participating" here :)scared:), for some reason it's a lot harder than I originally thought...
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  7. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    Gal, it is hands down the best place to improve your writing. Its also the best place ever to get feedback on the things you write.
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  8. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA Well-Known Member

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    True, however it feels a bit intimidating being amongst you guys...
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  9. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    awww, don't be intimidated. Take it with ease, it'll be a great learning experience.
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  10. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    That is a common mistake...people think it's easy :)
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  11. J Keeper

    J Keeper Super Jesus

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    It is :).
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  12. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    lol @ keeper.

    easy being a ninja, I know.
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  13. nom is dull.

    nom is dull. but shines up pretty.

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    coup - regarding your critique. Pretty good stuff that i pretty much completely agree on. I find it hard to get over the hurdle that not every line has to be completely packed with imagery and that i can just use lines to further the story. i've been trying to declutter but i find it tough.
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  14. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    :funny:
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  15. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

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    Picked topic 10 bars down, will finish the rest within 24hrs..

    And good morning..

    :)
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  16. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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    I feel so old and sluggish...I have to write and take a break then comeback to itthe nowadays and you whippersnappers just write a verse in a sitting.
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  17. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    I know what you mean...sometimes it all works out though. it's easier to scale back than to learn how to ramp up, you can't teach that

    :eek:wned:
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  18. nom is dull.

    nom is dull. but shines up pretty.

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    also i hoping that i could play it off as it being all about being in a dream so it was all scattershot imagery. but i always write like that, so i'm not sure i can.
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  19. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    lol yeah...people be leaving their verses out on a prayer that readers will interpret it like that though...you can't fool people like that.

    remember when lpree used 29 pictures in one verse ?
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  20. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    29 pictures? fuck. I know a pic tells a thousand words but cmon
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