[RANKS]Week 19 matchups and lounge

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by xX_NASTY_Xx, Aug 9, 2009.

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  1. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    You

    just stating that you didn't need to use all those words in your lines...taking some of those words out would've helped the flow of your piece...IMO..still a good verse
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  2. Text

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    I was looking foreward to working with a topic but its all good .
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  3. liquid`acid

    liquid`acid gods busy can I help you?

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    ooo clever

    i wish i could come up with rebuttals like that, real slick man
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  4. Got Life?

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  5. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    shadow...the lines arent even that long...

    some people say you need inner bar rhyming..then some say your lines are to long it messes up your flow...then when its short its to simplistic...

    every voter is different..so doubt I will make everyone happy

    what is a text flow anyway? you might be retarded and when you read it it might sound off..or you might be listening ot music when you read it and it sounds off...then if you read it with no music..what is it flowing to? your breath?

    I mean really..like I said before I doubt I will ever get this text storytelling battling..

    BUt it helps me with my poetry so its all good.. I'll HOLLA...
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  6. Text

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  7. Shadow

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    true.....but its something to try..

    i do miss writing poetry
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  8. Ace the Prophet

    Ace the Prophet A Prophet to the Game

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    Shadow, Erykah wins the No-Show shine this week so give the 5 points to her and I'll post up the rankings later

    I have been having laptop troubles recently and can't always get to a desktop, so I can't do the mag for this week. GL?, if you wish to do the mag or a week then feel free to do so. I'll send you my e-mail and I'll post it up for you when you have it done
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  9. Shadow

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  10. Got Life?

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    i don't check this shit daily, just seeing this now and i still haven't gotten around to look for a topic for a verse this week, much less writing a mag about shit that i read last sat/sunday.

    what do you even do as a mod bro? yawn, i'm not doing the mag, that much is certain.
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  11. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    If you can't post the Ranking i can do that if needed
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  12. Urizen

    Urizen I hate humans

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    its good to see that this is still up and running
    Tek didnt kill it

    thats good
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  13. .:Pain:.

    .:Pain:. Futurely J. Keeper

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    ^He sure came fuckin' close. Sign in mother fucker. It's be nice to have some more familiar names from the old days...
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  14. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    there's enough bad writers in the league.
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  15. The_K3

    The_K3 ^Secksi^

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    sorry i no showed the other week guys.. my laptop charger stopped working or my laptop stopped being able to be charged so i couldnt post what i wrote, ill have a new computer soon and ill be able to rejoin instead of hoppin on other peoples computers.. see yall then..

    p.s. got life is a bitch
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  16. Urizen

    Urizen I hate humans

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    yeah but we all still like you as a person tho GL

    so dont worry
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  17. Got Life?

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    kid you're 0-5 or 0-6 against me lifetime, and you'd be hard pressed to have received a vote in your favor even once in all our battles combined.

    talking shit when you're a talentless hack is really meaningless. get on my level, then talk shit.
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  18. liquid`acid

    liquid`acid gods busy can I help you?

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    ^why do you pretend like were talkin shit like were better writers?

    ppl just talk shit to you cuz yer a bitch with leaky hoop juices

    bein a better writer doesnt change horrible shit like that, no matter how good you get yer still a bitch tryna grow pearls in her sandy clam
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  19. Got Life?

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    lol kid, you're irrelevant, go back to kicking rocks in your gladiator sandals.
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  20. Urizen

    Urizen I hate humans

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    wow being delusional must be fun
    we had 2 battles at the MOST

    but its ok
    your mediocre at best with the same repetitive writing style
    and lame ass concepts

    trust me homey you aint that good
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