[RANKS] Week 18 Ranks and Lounge

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, May 15, 2012.

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  1. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    imma try something new this week
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  2. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    Ill totally rock an amish randy quaid... I want that shit officially in the thread
    Coup, you are awesome
    How's yer pilgrimage going?
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  3. TheInkwell

    TheInkwell New Member

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    speaking of celebrity conterparts... why does shadow have two?! what is this sorcery...
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  4. Kuja

    Kuja Jack Skellington

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    ffs sorry my internet connection has been down, only just come back up.
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  5. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    When your handjob game exceeds my own, then we'll talk


    mad homo
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  6. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    breath, walking the way is going...lot's of traps/snares but learning and gaining understanding and knowlege on the way...the more I learn the more I feel guilty about being at such a secular site as this.
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  7. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    so youre gonna not suck?
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  8. TheInkwell

    TheInkwell New Member

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    zing!
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  9. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    :surf:
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    kuja, post your verse, asshole!
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  11. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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  12. TheInkwell

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    a three way noshow... smh...
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  13. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    Smell my hand...
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  14. TheInkwell

    TheInkwell New Member

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    smh= shake my head o_O

    breath: i was actually thinking of your smoker verse, but either way, this weeks wasn't as good as either the tightrope or the smoker verse imo. based on your response from my vote, i figure you think you're a lot better than people here think you are. maybe you are, feel free to prove us wrong. i'd actually love to see that (i'm not being sarcastic here).
    BUT, what i can say is that a lot of the shortcomings from your pieces were in the "lyrical aspect." as for plot, i don't recall you ever posting a piece with a plot that was so complex it flew over my head. disagree? you're more than welcome to take one of your posted pieces and break it down to show us just how complex and deep it was.

    course, this is all just my opinion. others will disagree. but hell, if i was just going to pat your back and say everything you wrote was amazing, then i wouldn't be doing you any favors. you might as well post in Open Mic for that.

    everyone gets annoyed by some votes on here, it's unavoidable. i suggest you work through the annoyance and soak up what you can to improve.
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  15. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    Ah, shit, if I'd have known you were talking about the smoker piece I probly wouldn't have said anything, that one was awesome, and I actually spent a bit of time on it. I wasn't referring to you with the complexity and plot issues, or even bitching about about your vote, I spent less time on this than the tightrope crap.
    In a way you're right about me thinking I am underrated, but, what I deliver is generally spur of the moment without deciding or even looking at the topics before hand, so the blame lies with me.
    My main annoyance with this league is how the hip hop aspect of lyricism is almost frowned upon. Unorthodox contractions and apostrophes denoting how the words are intended to sound, to give proper rhyme sound and flow, even though this is "text" it is still supposed to be rap? Right?
    I'm tired of people bitching upon proper grammar things not "reading" right... this is not the dead poet society, its a fucking rap forum, things should be wrote how they sound if it is not the "normal" pronunciation... not in a manner that would get an A+ in a college lit. essay
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  16. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    sorry bout that no show ink.. life happened though.

    waiting for topics ^_^
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  17. TheInkwell

    TheInkwell New Member

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    Breath: i encounter that here sometimes as well, but its unavoidable. Actually imo, rstl isnt sinply people writing raps. We have people doing poems, some doing raps, others fusing the two. Rstl is to make better writers, not better rap writers. Like i mentioned before, theres an adjustment that needs to happen here cause its not an audio based league..

    patrown: we're not friends anymore. I hope you get bit by a spider.
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  18. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    i agree with Ink....expect the spider thing
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