Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Dec 20, 2010.
Did you really have to do that?
just trying my best
You have like 4 different fonts and sizes along with all three alignments....not saying your verse was bad or anything but it's a bit much with the formats
experimenting.. that's all.. tryna keep the reader interested.
oh i see
tryna be original.. i just hope the story resonates with the readers as much as it did with me, it's sorta my wifes life story but altered a lil bit.
Drop the 'ism' off 'Antidisestablishmentarianism', put 'comprehensible' before 'fashion,' completely drop, "that my friends is indispensable," and explain why you're saying that their disorder is insufficient. Shouldn't it be the less disorder the better?
be original with the story...the format doesn't tell the story...you do...
you're right.. i agree.. i just wanted to add a lil personality that's all..
your asinine psuedo intellect, and Antidisestablishmentarianism attitude
There should be a - in between psuedo-intellect.
Also there shouldn't be a comma since you have 'and' to connect subjects.
thnx cig n hc
I never wanted to be underground.
I'm tryin' to run the table on these mother fuckers.
Lmk what you have in the works, I still have a bunch of solid industry connects.
welcome shady K to the league! get comfortable. look around.. see what it do!
and to the otherz.. glad to have you aboard.
lotta brandon newbies this week..
lol t.a.c made a silly verse
just dropped my verse. merry christmas everybody
Word, I'm actually supposed to go to a studio in the next couple of weeks, but people are flakes so I wouldn't hold my breath.
Regardless, I'll hit you up, either in the next couple of weeks, or in Feb. when I'm back on the Island.
Whatever's clever homie, I don't even remember my aim sn/password much less have it installed, but i'm on my cell all the time, and if you have kik messenger you can kik me @ GorillaE on there also.
Word, I'll just shoot you a text or an e-mail.
Don't even know what the fuck kik is.
lol, it's bbm for smartphones.
the e-mail is firstname.lastname@example.org
Separate names with a comma.