Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Dec 20, 2010.
this was not crap in fact this should be the voting reference for all new comers! and old.
i read it... i lul'd
Here is one of Shadow's votes broken down:
Omega - I liked the concept of this but i felt like you could have spent a little more time on the deliver of this.
Really Shadow? I don't doubt that this may be true. But can you please point out where and why as you so plainly demanded.
I feel that any topic can be awesome if the delivery is on point. Now, you had some good flashes with the imagery
what good flashes of imagery? you wrote in the rules: "If you liked either of those areas, say why you liked them" So I ask you Shadow, "why do you think I had good flashes of imagery?"
and the vocab but i felt that you inconsistent line lengths messed with the flow too much and when you look at the lines that were a bit lengthy, words were added that didn't need to be there.
What words specifically? Remember in your rules you wrote, "If you had issues with someone's verse, it is MANDATORY that you state why and what they can do to improve." You told me I put words where didn't need to be. How is that helping me improve if I don't know what you're talking about.
Still, i enjoyed the story itself and thought you did well with the topic. good works O.
Did well? In what ways Shadow?
Shadow by your standards your vote would be disqualified and I know for a fact you have many other votes very similar to this one. Now come back and argue because I know you guys don't like to be proven wrong about something, you always have to be right.
oh em gee
Shadow's trying to introduce the Patriot Act
what always gets me, is one week im voted for, "rhyme and delivery" the next week "too wordy, to much emphasis on rhyme"
i know the voting isn't gonna be perfect, so can't be to upset.
but i think the members me included should take the league a smidgen more seriously
lol @ Omega
Lp that is my point..voting should be taken a bit more seriously which is why i want to try this new way of voting. A way i will follow as well
sigh @T.a.C's verse
Yeah I'm in Jersey homie, I still have the same #, but I have a diff phone so I don't have your math anymore.
^I'll pm you the digits, got a new phone myself.
look at this nigga movin' on up in the world like the jeffersons.
Took my ass long enough.
I'm still behind the curve.
I'm to fancy to be an underground rapper nowadays, feels kinda funny.
Prolly why I don't really frequent the mic anymore.
you sig reminds me of an Immortal Technique song, an abundance of large words used improperly to try and come across as intelligent.
to bad i did the research and that was all said correctly. if you can correct my signature please do, i made it in memorance of you
i believe it to fit you rather well!
wtf @ lp's verse
it's that bad??
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