[RANKS] Week 17 Ranks and Lounge

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Dec 20, 2010.

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    LMFAO @ that dog
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  2. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    how many dogs you got now tac?
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  3. Tacky Jones

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    only the two
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  4. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    oh i thought u ended up with that new monster
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  5. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    nah. couldnt convince my parents, and tbh these two are pains in the ass already.
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  6. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    ya, too much is a bit over the top, two is enough already. i bet you spoil them, too?
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  7. Tacky Jones

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    oh yeah. these dogs get chicken breast for breakfast every morning. they have a heater in the garage next to their pen, they're brought into the house by 9 every night.

    the third woulda been too much. on paper though it woulda been dope.
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  8. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    sheesh them dogs living like kings yo!
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    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    i showed my girl my celebrity counterpart.. she lol'd
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  10. Shadow

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    it depends...i doubt anyone will really need longer than a 24 hr extension
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  11. Shadow

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    You didn't say that in your vote and it would have been disqualified....if you had and do explain it in this manner(about the violence) i wouldn't messed with it. I will tell you this though. in the future, if you say what you say and it comes off as you didn't read their verse, regardless of who it is, i will disqualify the vote regardless of how you come to me and explain it. Fair warning to any and everyone. I don't want to see vote like this any longer


    iKon - i liked his verse because I liked the rhymes


    LP - i didn't like his verse because the flow was as small as his penis

    T.a.C - i liked his mechanics but his story made no sense

    etc

    Why didn't you like them and what did you like about this....this will inspire some positive reinforcement to people while giving them something to work on......I'll be watching

    [​IMG]
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  12. HeartCloaker

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    Do you mean the vote would have been disqualified how it was if you were disqualifying that week, or that if I had worded it to match what I meant it would have been disqualified?

    I told him his verse was simple and it was obvious he was adding in words just to rhyme. If that's not pointing out what he needs to work on I don't know what is. "Try having flow bigger than your petite penis" and "Make more sense" seem constructive and perfectly fine to me too, so I guess I'll be having a hard time with the votes.
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  13. Shadow

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    The vote that was in there would have been disqualify if i had started last week as soon as i saw it..It wouldn't have mattered if you had edited changes to it.

    if you don't want to listen, that is fine. I told you where your vote raised my eyebrow
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  14. J Keeper

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    @GL?
    Chillin' back home on winter break. I fucking hate being back home, so I figured I'd channel my depression into writing. Hopefully, if everything goes right, I'll record after X-mas.

    If you're still in the dirty Jerz, I ain't so far away anymore (Stony Brook). Lemme know brother.
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  15. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    J and GL? gonna meet up for some hot steamy butty romping action!


    now that's descriptive^ its imagery was endowed like the large size of my penis..
    what i liked about it, is how the words were placed appropriately making it an easy read, and even easier message to pick up immediately. my favorite discription was when i said
    "hott steammy butt romping action" i could have easily said "butt sex" or "gay intercourse" or "anal sodomy" but they lacked luster. and didn't quite define the surrounding terms effectively enough. nor efficiently.

    vote=LP


    that a good vote?
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  16. Tacky Jones

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    you faggots all missed the point. i jus dropped the greatest verse in RSTL history
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  17. Shadow

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    ^^move that crap to the garbage bin
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  19. Shadow

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    negative
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  20. Tacky Jones

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    my shits verse of the week
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