[RANKS] Week 17 Ranks and Lounge

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Dec 20, 2010.

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  1. the omega man

    the omega man so, it goes

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    I was just jokin bout not coming back, I like to play with u guys....

    I have known Coup no longer or better than the rest of u. I cosign with the cat because he's best poet I've seen in a long while, not because I know him.

    Cigma U made a valid point. Each person votes for what ever they are looking for in a verse. I am not discrediting your vote or anyone elses for that matter. You made a good point. "To each his own"....am I right?


    And no we are writing Poetry. If we were actually write songs then all of you would get an F. If any one of these verses were rapped over a beat they'd get laugh at. 2 Bar rhymes, lack of multis, long and short lines, choppy flows, etc....

    So as far as I was concerned, when I signed up, this was damn near a poetry league.

    My first week here I got reemed for using "fancy rhyming"......WTF? discredited for the use of multis on a rap board?

    Now you have the nerve to say this is not a poetry forum?

    Canibus said, "what is poetry and what is rap? I show em how to effectively bridge the gap." And I personally think thats what we are doing here.

    Sorry to attack u Shadow and Cigma. Y'all are entitled to your own thoughts and reasoning for your votes.

    When people write here they should know the types of people they are catering to and try and impress as many of them as you can. If the league is full of Cigmas and Shadows then you would probably write differently if it was full of CKs and Coups.

    Sorry if u hate my verses GL. I hate yours too.
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  2. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    It's not a poetry forum and just because you can't flow properly over a beat doesn't make it a poetry forum.

    Go ahead, write a verse with no rhymes that's pure poetry, see how that goes over niglet.
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  3. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    dude, read the title of the league

    RAPMUSIC Storytelling/Topical League
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  4. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    starting my verse
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  5. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    ey shadow, if a lot of people no show we should prolly extend this week until next friday due to christmas and shit
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  6. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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  7. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    youre also a semen loving homosexual
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  8. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    says the faggot
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  12. J Keeper

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    Shit is gangsta up in this bitch nowadays.
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  13. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    @ GL?, Shad and Cigma.

    I never mean to offend. I was just letting my gut speak.
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  14. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    I feel I can write my best this week and it's gonna be voted against no matter what.

    Knock me all you want, that is how I feel.

    I trust nothing

    let the verses decide

    Cig I do appreciate your feed back to no end. But I'm as preceptive as they come and I sense some shit was off in your vote last week.

    and I have no ego, fuck that. It's not justified with anything I do
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  15. Cigma

    Cigma Maxwell's Demon

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    You'll write your best and it will be marvelous and more dynamic than anything you have
    ever written

    because now, fused with your natural ability and skill for visual narration

    to encapsulate a moment

    it will be applied to a blueprint, a focused burst

    artistry and science

    And man... I've been off for the last couple weeks really, not right in my spirit.

    But I'll vote truthfully as I see it and maybe last week I didn't express myself
    fully and I apologize for making you doubt.
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  16. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    I hear ya cig. I should have thought a bit before posting. That's all I can think of to say right now.

    shad, are you extending the week because of Christmas?

    I won't need it but wouldn't care if you did personally.
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  17. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    lol, whaddup my nigga.
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  18. HeartCloaker

    HeartCloaker Winter is coming

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    You're making some new rules on voting that allows you to disqualify anyone who doesn't vote the way you want them to, in an attempt to "bring integrity into the league", and I'm backwards? GL's rhymes weren't as good as Coups, some of the things he said sounded funky, and he had a run of the mill situation. 9/10 times when asked to come up with a tragic situation people are going to say, "death". You may have related to it better because you have a child, but I was bored with it because I've seen it done so many times. If I didn't read the stories I wouldn't have voted, which I've done before. I explained in the other weeks lounge that I had just worded that critique wrong. What I meant was the violent stories he's done were better than that week's non-violent story, and if he had done a violent story I think he would have beat Coup.

    Vote: Coup
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  19. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    i jus posted the verse of the week
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  20. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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