[RANKS] Week 16 Ranks and Lounge

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Dec 13, 2010.

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  1. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    lol @ the beef in here.

    not trying to get under your skin or anything GL? but what have you accomplished with writing outside the RSTL? I'm just curious.
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  2. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Championships on other sites
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  3. Got Life?

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    Lol tac. I've actually been a published poet since I was 12 in numerous publications. I've written a few screen plays for a traveling theatre company out of chicago, and I ghosted for a lot of artists while working out of pretty much the top studio here in jersey, not to mention my own success with music.
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  4. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Is any of your music online?
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  5. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    Think as you might GL? lol

    Let's have the votes settle this in the battle. It has quite the stir already.

    All I ask is no dick riding votes.
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  6. nO gOoD!

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    I'd like to see some of these publications as well as hear the music you're making. Surely you have something on hand...
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  7. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    Which artists did you ghostwrite for?
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  8. Shadow

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  9. Got Life?

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  10. nO gOoD!

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    ^cool I'll check it out when I can.
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  11. the omega man

    the omega man so, it goes

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    GL need not even post....
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  12. Got Life?

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    now there's a cute concept.
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  13. Cigma

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    Gl story last week was hollow, like a Ludacris song.

    If you asked who had the best imagery, creative rhyme scheme, better lyrics
    depth, lines that hit you, honestly I won every category.

    You had a good twist with a smooth flow, but that's it, no substance.
    No connection with the reader, just... here look at this detestable situation.
    But you didn't make us detest it, you didn't bring us in at all.


    Anyway... I see Coup and GL posted, time to eat =) !!!!!
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  14. Cigma

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    Coup's verse crescendo's, swells... and GL verse is fukken polished.

    Gonna be tough, gonna be tough to vote, justly.

    Definitely need to rest and be fresh when I break them down
    read them at least a dozen more times.


    Ya'll did it, brought some credibility back to the champ match ayi!
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  15. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    ^ I can live with that
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  16. Got Life?

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    couldn't agree with you more tbh lol.

    e:/ as far as my verse being hollow last week.

    I also think your verse went over some people's heads, but I rather enjoyed it. The problem for me with your verse though was that it was devoid of emotion even though it was supposed to be an emotional one, or at least that's how I felt when reading it. Maybe i'm just emotionless.
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  17. Tacky Jones

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    i went back and rewrote my verse. its not 63 lines
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  18. the omega man

    the omega man so, it goes

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    what does "tbh" mean?
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  19. Coup d'état

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    to be honest
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  20. Shadow

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    so it's 60 lines?
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