Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Dec 13, 2010.
so tell me, will you be signing out after coup beats you this week?
sure why not
damn. ima miss you brudda
BTW GL? thx for correcting my mistake in my week 15 verse, how the fuck did I spell "up-serve" like that LMAO!
Aww Shit! juss looked at the championship match DAMN THAT'S GONNA BE BIG! Can't wait!
sure is, I got another glistening gem awaiting.
tacs a queer true story
stop sweating so hard, you need to find your own style as a writer before you can man up to go toe to toe with the big boys buddy.
last I checked, gems can not sweat
You should contemplate your use of the word glistening and the concept that cannot is one word, not two.
Mechanics need to be on point when you go toe to toe with me puppet.
lol @ this kid splitting the dictionary for emphasis.
Ive got your strings hanging, be ready
what is that defensive art you possess? psuedo judo?
I'm actually a 2nd degree bb in judo ironically, but rest assured coup, a nigga that's 6'6 doesn't lose to a Napoleonic fuck. Plus check your history, Napoleon got dapped up all kinds of awful when he tried to come at Russia.
Napoleon chose the wrong time, struck too haphazardly...came out bleeding in the Russian winter, true. Still he ruled upon his return, at the cost of hundreds of thousands of lives.
Make no mistake, Napoleon, born of a common name, rose from nothing to greatness -crowning himself Emperor of a French dynasty.
Check your history and look up Napoleon at Toulon and what he did there.
Check your present day surroundings.
I'm the winner of the last 3 BOTW. I have 2 of 3 VOTW and 1 of the 3 that I didn't get was a verse that lost to me.
I'm Russian (born there and the whole 9 yards). It's winter time.
Bar none I'm a better writer and much more accomplished. You're still trying to find your own and you're coming off a lucky win over 2 mediocre showings by 2 slightly above average writers. And even then they're only slightly above average based on the standards of the past year or so.
Reality is, if I write, you lose. If I give a modest effort, you lose in what appears close. If I phone it in, you still lose due to me just being that much iller. Look at it this way...
Vocab - I have you beat.
Story Development - I have you beat.
Imagery - I have you beat.
Flow - I have you beat.
Rhyme Scheme - I have you beat.
Mechanics - I have you beat.
What do you get? A consolation prize of battling someone irrelevant after you catch your L.
lol @ this kid sweating bullets and reassuring his psychology. Get past this illusion, it’s not a world as intact as it might seem to you. I was just schooling you on Napoleon the Great, and you come at me with your crutch.
At least you have your check list pointed, so as you know what to bring to my table when you verse someone of my ability. Check it once, check it twice.
You exist as a writer in RM.com, which is a very small box. You have grown in this box to falsehoods and half truths.
You want to know my back ground ? Well you’ll just have to wait for my interview.
You've been lied to and lied to often.
You're clearly oblivious, go scowl through the archives and find the 6 or 7 interviews I've done and then you might aware yourself.
I've accomplished more with writing than you ever will and for me this is nothing more than a hobby princess.
Face facts. I ruffle feathers. Yours are ruffled.
Like I said, you exist as a writer in RM.com. Not really a bragging point, yes ?
And reading your dull verses proves nothing of anything, other than your feathers being plucked at the onset of real competition.
Peace, I might stick with this, if only to your amusing defense.
You mock an existence as a writer here yet look up to me via pm.
Sorry that you stuck out your hand looking for a friend and I told you to kick rocks.
Separate names with a comma.