[RANKS] Week 15 Ranks and Lounge

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Dec 6, 2010.

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  1. Cigma

    Cigma Maxwell's Demon

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    Damn that Dizaster dude murdered Jerzy in that battle.

    That other guy was hapless and played out of his class eeshk.



    Lp is just saying what we all think when we lose after writing something
    we put effort into and are proud of and it doesn't get the reaction we hope.

    I thought I had a pretty sick concept too LP ya dig?

    It's like when I lost to BillyNomates.

    What was his verse actually about?
    While I tried to develop something more than just words on a screen
    you read and throw away.

    I lost I realize because my vision is not clear enough, my rhymes are
    a little too subtle to readers and also my mechanics weren't strong
    enough to hold it all together.

    It's been a struggle to write from my heart because my intellect has it's own
    ideas.


    I wrote about dogs barking in your head when they haven't been fed, maybe
    you understand a little bit more where I was coming from in that verse.
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  2. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    which is understandable but throwing a bitch fit is dumb and makes him look retarded
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  3. Cigma

    Cigma Maxwell's Demon

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    I was on a Spurs forum and read this... it's about basketball but funnily enough
    it just as easily applies to the threads events.

    But, see, I didn’t get it back then. I was just a punk kid, prone to the
    superficial.
    Nuance was lost on me. I knew what I was seeing and I knew
    there was more to the game than putting the little orange ball in the hole,
    but I was immature. Irrational, even.

    I was a fanatic in the worst sense of the
    word: passionately ignorant.


    Anyone ever read Pablo Neruda? This is from his poem

    Tonight I can write the saddest lines...

    ...I no longer love her, that's certain, but how I loved her.
    My voice tried to find the wind to touch her hearing.

    Another's. She will be another's. Like my kisses before.
    Her voice. Her bright body. Her infinite eyes.

    I no longer love her, that's certain, but maybe I love her.
    Love is short, forgetting is so long.

    Because through nights like this one I held her in my arms
    my soul is not satisfied that it has lost her.

    Though this be the last pain that she makes me suffer
    and these the last verses that I write for her.


    Forgive my randomness missus got me feeling a little glum.
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  4. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    word @ shadow. next time its a ban
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  5. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    Mag to be posted in a few
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  6. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    bitch fits are pointless, it wont retract any votes anyhow, you end up just looking like a sore loser.
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  7. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    finally, ya fuckin lazy ass slacker


    =D
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  8. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    word shadow. good work on the mag. I'll be back soon to check it out.
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  9. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    tac, he was waiting on my parts, I've been super busy at work, hence my absence from the league. unfortunately I won't be back anytime soon. or fortunately for those who dislike my writing.
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  10. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    i was jus being a dick anyway
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  11. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    good mag No GoOd and shaddy. the mag to me is an important part of the league...sort like back in middle school waiting for lunch so you can buy the card board pizza.

    and respect is earned in this league- this is what the morale of the latest drama is about.

    Ng, come back so I may have the pleasure of versing you...your prediction made my blood boil- as it would anyone, certainly you understand. i wouldnt pick some stranger over my boys either
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  12. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    sadly, this mentality is here. I feel like its a good ole boys club. Writing should be the determining factor, not brotherhood. peace to the gods.
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  13. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    Its not a rap league...it's a Storytelling league.

    He's staying banned, he bitched last week and everyone said the same ish to him. Spamming and spamming...it was clear. tell the nigga to change his tampon and man up
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  14. ikon211

    ikon211 Member

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    Honestly im confused wit the Lpree situation, WTF did he DO!?! wait wrong question...Why did he spam the thread?? I swear u take a week off from writing and ppl getting banned and all other BS; damn lol
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  15. Muti

    Muti I just write

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    You know what is great about the world we live in? We are all unique in our own ways and God blessed us with the ability to see things in our own perspective. With that being said one person will be wrong..one person will be right. Some will agree and some won't lol Lets move on.. and get to writing.. God bless all of you...and yall are in my prayers..

    GOT LIFE...You are first one Im praying for... :)
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  16. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    I'll start to pray if you promise my prayers of you being struck by lightning come to fruition.
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  17. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    don't take it personal coup, I have no issues with your writing, I had to choose someone and it was only coincidence that I know the others
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  18. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    GL? always the bad guy, glad he's here..lol
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  19. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    no personal offense taken NG, that prediction just made me comb over my verse and plug any holes it may have to give it a better chance of not losing :D

    shit is too competitive in a no good way
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  20. nom berryman.

    nom berryman. the great poet.

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    please don't patronise me.
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