Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Dec 6, 2010.
^^ u leaving RSTL hommie?!?
Lpree I have a couple of oxy's, lets snort them up hommie
get back in the league then o0 im in
How come Vern isn't in a battle?
Did he sign out... he won last week via no-show.
LP man you could have voted and we would have tied.
Our match was so close because they were different type of verses displaying
skill, one of those toss ups, whichever you were feeling more. Lyrical joint
vs Story Arc.
Unfortunate you are signing out since you seem to be coming into your own.
I keep plugging away even though every week someone tells me I can't rhyme,
meanwhile I rhyme six times in my first two lines.
Everything will turn out fine at the end, if it's not going well right now, well...
it ain't the end!
I got some South Island Sweet in my stash =).
And finally, Got Life. It was inevitable.
I'm your huckleberry.
oops, gotta fix that
.............WOOOOOOOOOOOW!!! (in flavor flavs's voice)
thanks for pointing out my mistake Cigma, helped me catch a mistake i made on Crook's record.
when i do new ranks i post the ranks from the previous week in a word doc and go off that. last week i added vern/face/someone else to a match but didnt put it in the thread. also when i corrected Crooks score i didnt put it in the thread.
I agree completely with Cigma.
Overall this league is pure and honest. And votes should reflect this every time.
word these votes got me buggin lp u already know how I do in the booth sooooo......
theres a big difference between an audio verse and a text verse
what is smh?
in all fairness, Cigma did bring a dope verse as well...so close it was a tie. However, I hear ya on yer gripes.
priest, drop the kanye act. "cigma, im happy for you and ima let you finish, but my verse was the greatest of all time".
do you become a star baskettball player over night? do you become a dope rapper over night? do you become a porn star over night? shit takes practice. youve been at this a few months and you have improved. but like i said a few weeks ago. you arent as good as you think. everythings going to sound good to yourself. youre always going to think your verse is the best. why do you think people proof read other peoples essays? cuz shit sounds different in your mind cuz you know what youre trying to say.
shaking my head
If you looked at my verse on the topic Flights of Fancy.
It started off with a Male pilot thinking he was all that about to scare some women for
a good laugh... except that woman turned out to be Amelia Earhart.
So instead of making this lady scamper he unwittingly provokes her to become the first
woman to do so many things in aviation etc..
After that incident she knew she had to fly and went on to buy her first plane at 21, first
to fly over the atlantic, first to do so many things, and get world wide recognition...
and women couldn't even vote yet.
To put all that depth in such a short space is difficult, and I could have done better yes,
but my message was implied for those who are perceptive, and for those that
understood my vocabulary, I painted a great situation I think.
And what did you do?
Honestly, I thought your verse was creative and lyrical, but unoriginal? Like a collection of others
peoples wisdoms and sayings, that were regurgitated, surrounding the picture topic.
From "I've been told all that glitters ain't gold...
The first shalll be last etc..."
This ain't your average bible verse? So now you are commentating on your own verse
within the verse? That's like me saying, get ready I'm bout to spit knowledge.
I was like, man that's all filler, where are your words?? What is LP saying?
You used a barrage of words that were loaded, but words alone don't make
the verse powerful. Even with all that weighty vocab, you still lack substance.
You use words to seem deep, like someone who has heard of great deeds
but hasn't lived them, but by using these type of words, they can associate
themselves with these prolific ideas and moments.
That's something that's been consistent in most of your verse, where you are like an
echo of wisdom, instead of the source.
When I use vocab, it's specific words that build the story... and if it happens,
to be flashy too, well that's by design, because I can do that
You quote bible verses and spit positive themes but study your attitude.
Right now you are coming off as real sullen.
be healthy peace gn for me
not really, im just calling a spade a spade.
aye Cigma, I failed to realize that your verse was the way you just mentioned above (that the showoff pilot somehow motivated the girl, Erhart, in the crowd to take up flying).
it was a good verse and it just fell short of that realization for me tbh. lol good attempt though. And I thought I was a real preceptive person too. hah!
that's what this league is about though trial and error. I'm in trials, shit we all are.
and Lpree, what cig just said above is truthful, id take someting away from what he just said to you man. I know cos, it relates and implies to everyone here.
okay, youre seriously starting to annoy me. leave this thread until your temper tantrum is over because youre seriously one response away from being banned from the league for life.
there are no politics, your verse jus doesnt win. look at cigma's fuckin record. dudes got 6 losses. no ones dick riding him throwing votes his way that he doesnt deserve. he won the match because you didnt vote. it was going to be a tie, or nearly a tie had you voted.
like i said earlier, cry elsewhere.
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