[Ranks] Week 11 Ranks and Lounge

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Nov 1, 2010.

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  1. Extreme Venom

    Extreme Venom Well-Known Member

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    Yea I went real basic this week stretching the old bones like a top athlete who hadn't exercised in a few years getting back into the game.. i'll give more & more of what i have as I brush the dust off the pen.. this week was insuring I could still move multis around while keepign Ideas cohesive.. next week I'll stretch the vocab abit & polish up the flow and after that delve deeper into a deeper poetic side.. It just feels good to write and get some critique again.. i appreciate all the comments. Good or bad its all for growth, dig..2
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  2. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    niggas bout to feel the darkness...
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  3. CrookCity

    CrookCity Member

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    im putting everybody on notice anybody who want it come see me on here I may be new but I will be a heavy threat
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  4. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    that jus happened
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  5. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    you didn't see it?
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  6. CrookCity

    CrookCity Member

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    im talkin to errbody on this site fam come and get it's finished
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  7. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    niggas is on notice??
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  8. CrookCity

    CrookCity Member

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    Let me put it this way oooon noooooooootice!!!
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  9. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    :doubleml: :shoot:
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  10. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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  11. Murderous Keys

    Murderous Keys All's well that ends

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    Yeah, I Tried to go basic this week too, Plus keying a verse on my
    phone it seemed longer than it was, lol so I Had to revise it with
    a narrative speach of a basic story with no detail form. It read good
    but even I lost interest. lol.

    Oh well, I Shouldn't of waited to the last minute to write, But I've been having
    trouble picking a topic that I can connect with. And by the looks of this weeks
    topics, it's going to be the same :-(

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  12. Cigma

    Cigma Maxwell's Demon

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    Hey Mk

    Write what's on your mind, in your heart,

    you can pick the topic afterward.
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  13. Cigma

    Cigma Maxwell's Demon

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    p.s.

    I think you had something with the way you weaved the story of Mark the boy from Mobet.

    That should be one of the quintessential examples for an RSTL verse.
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  14. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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  15. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    dope verses this week for real. there is sick talent in this league and I'm shocked the rstl isn't more popular here. here's to next week.
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  16. Murderous Keys

    Murderous Keys All's well that ends

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    Yeah, I thought the league was about to expand greatly, then 3 or 4 heads signed out.

    :-(

    Hopefully we'll get some more sign ins, Oh well..I'm just going to continue to Write.
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  17. Extreme Venom

    Extreme Venom Well-Known Member

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    lol leave it to LP to Post some sick ass topic pic like this :funny:
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  18. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    muuuuhhhuuuhaaaahhaahahahahahahahahahahaa
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  19. Murderous Keys

    Murderous Keys All's well that ends

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    I just wanted to thank Shadow for allowing me
    to post and not getting a no show, I've never
    No-showed in any match, it's disrespectful and
    I apologize for "techniqly" no-showing Shad,
    But You're a hell of a guy and you allowed
    me to drop rather than taking an easy W
    even though it turned out that way, but
    regardless you couldn't for-see that.

    Anyway just wanted to say Thank You.
    You're a kind sport and now we are even.

    1-1.

    I'll get the rubber match, Promise.

    :)


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  20. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    Np MK....you're a good dude and i know how things can get and i want to earn my wins. I don't like no shows and would rather lose then win that way tbh. I look forward to our next match
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