[RANKS] Official Rankings of Round One

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Quriosity, Jun 3, 2008.

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  1. RICO

    RICO my daughter right there

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    nah no biggie.....sad part is it doesnt look like ima be in the next round...lol


    and did anyone realize her best freind was jesus???
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  2. Avirex

    Avirex New Member

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    it would be hard to miss it, seeing as how that was the topic u wrote to lol.. ofcourse to me god an jesus are one in the same both magical beings, considered fake by some...
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  3. RICO

    RICO my daughter right there

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    lol........ya i dont mind losing....i was just happy to compete. DAD's a good writer. and my story was mediocre. thats how i write....each and everytime....


    goood looooking on the feed back though



    AND GOOOOOOOOO SEAHAWKS......
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  4. Lucifa

    Lucifa Viva La Eva

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    RICO - I got it all .. and I did figure you wanted the reader to "think" .. but it was too far fetched and not delivered intrestingly enough to want to ponder on it .. not enough depth to warrant a part 2 IMO ..
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  5. LDogg The King

    LDogg The King The High Life

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    Yes!
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  6. RICO

    RICO my daughter right there

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    Luc......nah i feel you. to be honest it was a goood story for me i just wish i had wrote this a few weeks back and had enough time to polish my skills being that this is really my only full story of the season. hahaha.....

    I DONT WANT ANYONE TO THINK IM WHINE'N im happy to be apart of this....and dad wrote a good story.

    LDOGG.....

    dogg we gonna fuck some kats up this year i cant wait i bought preseason tickets to the CHargers seahawks in august. im stoked....havent been to a game in over ten years.
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  7. Lucifa

    Lucifa Viva La Eva

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    Ice Hockey?
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  8. LDogg The King

    LDogg The King The High Life

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    hockey ? haha wtf NFL homes

    Rico.. u in seattle? I know u said you used to live here or something but cant remember,... if the pregame is in seattle ill see you there : )
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  9. Lucifa

    Lucifa Viva La Eva

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    ah .. kinda sounded more like an NHL name .. my bad ..

    what kinda price do you pay to attend an NFL game? ..
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  10. Avirex

    Avirex New Member

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    depends where u sit.. I have season tickets so not sure on single prices... probably 50 per ticket for decent seats
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  11. nah son

    nah son the hundredaire

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    me vs bodian up

    check it .. mic check one two

    i gotta run but ill be back to vote it up lata

    holla
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  12. Eye-Rime

    Eye-Rime the intellectual.

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    i caught it/thought i caught it but it really added little effect if any to the story in my opinion, i dont know, the whole idea to me just seemed to be missing something whether intentionally or not

    but yea, i figured the j was jesus while reading and then you said johnny and i was thinking maybe it had something to do with him, but i really had little time to marinate because i was so distracted by other tid bits
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  13. DaAlmightyDolla

    DaAlmightyDolla Greatness

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    honestly i was in no mood to write. i thought u might win if u tried hard enough. i just dont want 2 write stories but topicals dont really win. i thought u had a strong chance. just by looking at ur verse first glance i was like oh oh i lost. better luck next time though.
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  14. 3-Planes

    3-Planes Cruel... and unusual

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    damn i really wish i had spent more time on that key haha

    i'll vote tomorrah (my brain does not work properly under these 90 degree conditions)
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  15. RICO

    RICO my daughter right there

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    Nah i HAD family over there when i was younger, but now i reside in Pal m springs. but ya the games in San diego......so it was my only chance.....



    i got 7 rows back 50 yard line.


    and Q- no biggie....i knew when i posted it that it was a bit un polished, but in a way....i wanted the story to kinda be like that.....although i wasnt completely happy with it, it was fun...and i appreaciate the feed.....

    no way do i feel my lose is unjust.

    Dad- i was tottally digging you piece though...and i was like damn....seems i have to do well....but my writing style it sooo basic.....i really have to deliver on NArrative and character, to really win a match and this time i didnt come through.....



    I WOULD LIKE TO WRITE SOMETHING FOR THE MAG IN THE UPCOMING WEEKS IF POSSIBLE THOUGH?
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  16. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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  17. RICO

    RICO my daughter right there

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    ^fucking sweet........
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  18. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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  19. RICO

    RICO my daughter right there

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    hahahahahahahah^
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  20. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    if luc and jook are for it, i'll even go as far as to let GL? fill an empty spot, but we need to fill them ASAP

    im pretty sure he has a verse written already
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