Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by Rhawfax, Jul 19, 2005.
Love The First Verse
lol @ ****** engineer, scumbag. hah
beat is ill.
"suicidal at times but I'll never give up."
"blessing you fucks with these record you love."
"ways you can die, maybe thats why, so close to takin my life."
Flow is sick, lyrics are ill. Typical raw ass delivery.
lol @ syke.
my names pat bateman!
"when it comes to blood and guts I like to spill em"
this shit was raw man, illest Ive heard in a while.
btw, QVC told me you laced a verse to a track we did? I'd love to hear it, could you get @ me on AIM and send it to me. AOL - "NeyeDus"
word fax.. dope as always
yo word up rhawfax!!!!
this is really sick loving the beat... engineer blessed this beat.. ya flow is real nice on this.. and ya delivery is sick.. quality is also excellent... the vocals so real crisp ... i like the line about blood and guts and how u like to spill em lol.. that was nice.. this was a real dope piece im feelin it alot.. im about to download this son son!!!
yo we should mos def hook up sometimes and lace a piece if u down.. we can make some illness happen....
hit me back about that.. nice track man keep up the sick work...
if u dont mind can u peep this new track i would appreciate it g... http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=908509
Wow This Flow Is Assertive. Your Vocal Blend Firmly With This Beat. iLL Lyrics Too, Phat Drop yo...
I miss you
Ok, i don't miss enginears beats .... But I miss you!!! (kidding, tee hee)
You still breathe like a monster after every fucking line... but so do I
I got the rhawfax disease these days... No not Gonnoreah silly!
Im making tracks no longer than 1:30 single verses... it's terrible
Yo.. I want a track with you... I mean.. we could try to flip your script, or talk about eating aborted fetuses for the stem cell diet... you know your usual!
Lol, I'm kidding man..
We could each do a 1:30 verse...lol... no chorus... just roll some crazy clips of zombies feasting who knows...
Lol...kidding kidding... well not really that time.
I wanna hit up a collab with you before you go to jail or die though...I figure we got a few weeks~
Lol, tight track, I think sometimes you didnt extend your bars long enough, so you extended a single word for flow, and the effect wqouldve been better by simply adding another syllable to the line... Thats my only comment, usually your fine.
aim: killa noodles
unblock me pweez
You need to de-hiss your shit.... wtf @ ' ni.gga ' that shit is gay and makes it seem like you want attention to me....
Flow comes in beautifully, real energetic... Verse is really hot but its like every verse you spit is part of one neverending song... like ' insert blood and guts, patrick batemen, serial killer' end song. I dunno, I think you could take your writing to another area personally, but cool for what it is.
Eng came nice too
damn delivery is nice as shit.....
beat is pretty dope.....im feelin the voice...the flow is pretty unique...rhyme scheme in nice....damn you killin this man....this verse....is insane...nice multies...you shoulda made this a complete song though...with a hook n everything....thats my only complaint...good work though....much props...
PLEASE return the favor...shits gettin mad slept on...thanks
sounds like the older classic shit u used to make. sickness~
"settle down, im just playin alright
everythings going great n im fine SIKE"
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