rainy night in georgia..*REAL HIPHOP* all love returned

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  1. 6th_plague

    6th_plague More then meets the eye

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    and they say niggaz in the south cant rap on some real shit

    not mixed fully so its gonna sound kinda flat and jim shiesty part sound kinda off at one part..

    hollowbones once again

    1st -problem chid
    2nd reese da beast *me*
    3rd jim shiesty...

    just about some real talk about how life is down south..its hard down here.

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    all feedback is returned ...

    beat my mr.e aka brandon heat...
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  2. freed the kreed

    freed the kreed Whats good?!?!

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    aiight bro, returnin the peep...

    1st dude..he aiight, he gotta flow and lyrics...he lackin a lil bit of emotion tho in the delivery, cuz it would bring the beat out more and the flow would stand out a lil more too..startin to actually sound better tho as the verse goes on..

    aiight, i like this beat yo..real coo, diggin the sample...

    aiight, reese da beast...flow is real on point man...sound much more hype than the first dude...flow real hot on here bro...ocean tides huh..haha..good shit, u kind of got an east coast flow...good shit tho...

    third dude.....dude comin tight, real down south vybe from him....and the flow real polished...i fucks with this..good collab here bro..fa real fa real..
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  3. Noib Da Mutt

    Noib Da Mutt New Member

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    yeah homie, nice drop...

    Beat is on point, first dude just needs more umph in his delivery... your shit is straight homie- you always come real... And, last dude has a real Southern style, and I'm likin his verse alot...



    overall, shit is dope dawg...
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  4. Professor

    Professor New Member

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    This shit was nice.. The beat was mellow, and I felt the vibe. You came nice on this. Good shit, son...
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  5. datN!GGAeDouble

    datN!GGAeDouble Lil Havana Representa

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    hollow bones is in the building!

    dont get me started!

    i been told you how i feel bout this song dawg...this my type of shti right here!
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  6. The Rippa

    The Rippa RIP is the name!!!!!!!!!!

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    Checked your track, the beat and sample is off the hook. Lyrical content, pretty good. I dont get caught up in that southern niggas cant really spit talk, yall did your thing. Vocals was cool, just a tad bit loud on the mix. Think each verse should have a lil more energy to bring across the message. Overall good track. Keep bangin...


    RIP
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  7. ~G.I~

    ~G.I~ Guest

    returning the favour


    beat is cool, feeling that

    1st dude - not really feeling his flow and vibe...it sounds too much like he's lazy.

    2nd dude - feeling this more...its more hype, flow is on point, nice drop

    3rd dude - lyrics is cool, flow is ait, delivery is ait,

    overall a decent track.

    stay up 1
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  8. Red304

    Red304 iLL Tactics ENT

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    returning favor homie,

    beat nice, sample hot i love georgia i lived in atl for a year miss that shit flow started out nice 1st kat flowin on point stayed on topic as well, 2nd kat lovin his multis got some nice multis braves line hot flow on point as well maybe better then 1st kats flow 3rd kat lovin his eneergy same as other 2 flow there all 3 of yall ma fuckas did ya thing glad i peeped this shit also thx 4 hittin me up with feeedback appreciate it holla at me ne time u needd feed holla back stay up
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  9. Mic Grippa

    Mic Grippa Mic Grippa

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    yup...its nice. u already know that though. 1
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  10. IProFound

    IProFound Chokyonim

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    returnin' love

    *starts track* yo I'm diggin' this beat... nice vocal.

    first cat- kinda boring. not really grabbin' me... he got some pretty decent lyrics, jus needs to get it together, as far as the feelin' and emotion.

    second- i like this cat. he gotta nice flow. i think if this was recorded in higher quality this'd be hot. dont really sound too southern..

    third- im likin dude, dope @ one •••••• away from bein' racist... ancestors picked cotton now im wearin a white tee... niiiiiiice. Dude proly the nicest lyrically, i think the 2nd cat had the best style, but if this cat upped his delivery a bit thas some serious shit.

    Overall this track is pretty damn nice man. Thanks for the love on my shit.

    1.
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  11. P R I M O

    P R I M O Shout out to Autotune

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    beat is cool kinda wu tang ish

    the first dude pretty cool, he got the content just need to polish up more ya know

    2nd dude - i like his lyrics the most, he a lil more polished too. back n fourth like ocean tides haha... this is tight tho, yall got a unique style when yall get super polished its gonna be serious. yall got the style tho

    3rd dude - this like a chorus or somethin - i like his flow - is this the first dude? yall on some real shit tho i fucs wit this

    overall good track on some south hip hop shit

    keep droppin

    we can collab one of these days just get at me on AIM - MrcPrimo
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  12. killa_bone

    killa_bone New Member

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    Liking the beat, scratch that, loving the beat with the vocals.

    All verses are nice, just real talk.

    Would definetely download the polished version of this song. All emcee's did the thing, good shit.

    3rd verse took it in my opinion.

    Mine: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=979094

    Cheers
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  13. VerbHertz

    VerbHertz Lexicon

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    sick sample...

    1st: quality is aight... flow is solid, lyrics are nice. doubles are solid too. delivery is kinda lazy but it sounds nice over this beat.

    damn i love that rainy night in georgia sample

    2nd: flow is really nice, quality seems a bit better, maybe its just cuz you sound a bit more energetic. roach goes back and forth like oceantides. these verses seem really short... but they're nice.

    3rd: racist atheist shit was nice. you and reese were the best on the track... dont sleep on first dude though.

    nice track, verses coulda been a bit longer but it was pretty solid.

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=979199
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  14. psomonkey

    psomonkey Sin Ontology

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    samples pretty dope....feelin tha beat too

    first cat-....voice is aiight......delivery needs a lil work....presence is ok.....lyrics are pretty good....overall this shits decent

    second cat-....flowws dope.....feelin tha lyrics too.....deliverys good....adlibs kinna off and on....presence is real good....dope verse

    third cat-.....voice is cool....verse starts off real good....presence is good....deliverys ok....flows coo....lyrics nice....overall this shits pretty dope

    overall this tracks pretty dope dogg
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  15. TAB

    TAB Model

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    Wooo sick beat. Made me want to sing along with that bitch. First cat is horrible and I mean that in the nicest way possible. Lyrics were solid, but his delivery and enunciation needs exponential improvement. 2nd cat, a lot more polished. Not feeling the voice but the flow is there and the lyrics compliment it well. You still need to polish your style though, sounded hesitant at some points. 3rd cat, sick voice. Probably the most polished cat on this song. Not feeling so many voiceovers. I like that accentuation you got there as well. Overall decent joint ya'll.
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  16. 6th_plague

    6th_plague More then meets the eye

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    thanks for all the love..we trying to do the damn thangggg
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  17. Higher Rhymes

    Higher Rhymes Active Member

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    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=979025
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=979025
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=979025
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=979025
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=979025

    holla back please. any way lemme hit this up..


    okay beat is nice.. but sample is repetitive and annoying..
    quality could be better but it doesnt ruin the track

    1st guy--voice is pretty grimey.. real NY sounding, flows not bad.. delivery is NY like that.. pretty good stuff here

    hook--not much here.. just chillin and talkin still good

    2nd--"blackmail the black male" like that.. nice lines up in this verse.. brang tha heat and tha energy..very illy.. really southern, GA up sonny.. flow nice, delivery nice, soundin really polished..

    hook--?? dope lines, short but gets the point across

    3rd--"1 ni**** awa.." haha damn dude.. flow is smooth, you are RAELLY smooth with this mess.. game with it, keep it consistant, multis and wordplay are madd dope

    keep it commin and peep my link

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=979025
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  18. Extreme Venom

    Extreme Venom Well-Known Member

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    First off this beat is gangsta... You don't even expect it to pop off like it did.. yea I feel what every one was sayin' about a small amount of feeling missing.. but that beat keeps you there & his flow is on point.. Lyrically if he said certain parts with that lil bit of feeling thats missing the whole verse is poppin' Cause he sayin' some real shit.. but yea niggaz gotta feel it hardbody in combination with the flow.. that chorus is poppin'.. uughh @ reese wit the power intro like 'Just look at the Resume'.. the flow on the beat is what gets you & , if you hit the beat with the cut on some shit like... this nicca Jim is poppin' loool just the way the 'One ••••••raway from being racist' line hit off the wit the beat made the shit harder.. uuughh... I'm down loadin this.. finish cooking the product & condense this crack!!
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  19. Dj FuSe ONe

    Dj FuSe ONe New Member

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    thanx for the reply...

    yo the only person im feeling is you on this track.....you completly out shinned everybody....the beat is tight..just not feeling those 2 other mcs...keep droping tracks...i like ur flow...

    return the reply
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=975752
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  20. OurSin

    OurSin lol @ equality

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    damn, i got this song on my comp (where the sample is from) was gonna do something to it, but i prolly won't now...lol...

    First cat, yeah mixing needs work like you said, vocals madd loud......comming in pretty nice, flow is on point. Emotion seems a bit lacking though, still cool shit. Love this beat man, pisses me off it wasn't made by me...lol......chorus is tight......second cat, comming in nicely......no real critique on this one, besides the mixing. Last cat......flow is nice, you sound kinda dead at the beginning.......Ok delivery picked up some.....adlibs need to come down.....besides that sound pretty tight.......Nice song here, just need the quality bumped up and it'll be dope....
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