QuiVer Vs Da Future

Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by QuiVer, Jun 6, 2003.

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  1. QuiVer

    QuiVer New Member

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    15-20 lines
    3 votes win
    ill spit 1st
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  2. QuiVer

    QuiVer New Member

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    alright

    Im stuck in the past, old school style//
    ur names da future, im already recording this lost to ur future file//
    i worked hard, walked that extra mile//
    while ur in burger king cleanin the grout from the tile//
    kiss my ass with a smile//
    shoot u dead, throw on the dead body pile//
    mark u with a star//
    treat u like hell//
    shit wat the fuck is that smell//
    its ur rotting carcaus//
    your clown act is the worst in the circus//
    ur act is in fact, not queit in tacked//
    i send out electric shocks//
    hurt u and come down on u like a pile of rocks//
    i can tell im drivin u insane//
    wats that insult u happened to mutter//
    tell me now//
    did i stu stu studder//
    and i decided to end this by letting "It" the clown//
    pull u threw the drain pipe into the filthy gutter//
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  3. *Da FuTuRe*

    *Da FuTuRe* ReCoRd 10-1(4 k.o's)

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    theres a homo who juss loged on 2 rm hurd name is quiver//
    he battle me an now im guna make this bitch cry me a river//
    u fukin bitch battlin me is like laughin at me//
    afta u desrepect me ur life ends in a castraphy//
    i rip lil bitchs like quiver all the time//
    1 of those punk ass n*gga's that trys 2 rhyme//
    that fake ass bitch u come on dis site agian u guna get dropped//
    poped twice in da head an once in da leg by da glock//
    u come round my block u guna get rocked//
    cuz im Da FuTuRe an im guna run dis site wit my nine takin out bitches like u one at time u here that line press remind an get this shyt in ya mind//cuz thts real the kind that get ya da win//
    shyt like urs r da type thta should b in da bible unda sins//
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  4. *Da FuTuRe*

    *Da FuTuRe* ReCoRd 10-1(4 k.o's)

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    yo i posted my rap on my own thread b4 i saw the line requirment so my bad i only got 11 but w.e but now that we both posted VOTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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  5. QuiVer

    QuiVer New Member

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    thats alright..
    lookin 4 votes ppl
    come on
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  6. *Da FuTuRe*

    *Da FuTuRe* ReCoRd 10-1(4 k.o's)

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    uppin votes!!
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  7. *Da FuTuRe*

    *Da FuTuRe* ReCoRd 10-1(4 k.o's)

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    uppin votes!!!
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  8. *Da FuTuRe*

    *Da FuTuRe* ReCoRd 10-1(4 k.o's)

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    WTF!! cmon ppl VOTE!!
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  9. *Da FuTuRe*

    *Da FuTuRe* ReCoRd 10-1(4 k.o's)

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    cmon u fukin ppl VOTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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  10. Da Rokkwilda

    Da Rokkwilda RoKK WiLD.

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    tie...u both equally sucked
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  11. nOnni

    nOnni Active Member

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    i find verse full of aimless cuss words n use of "glocks" n ish tiring to read.. but close battle. both evenly matched..

    Future just gets it.. didnt read as simple.. n made it more directed

    peace boys
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  12. *Da FuTuRe*

    *Da FuTuRe* ReCoRd 10-1(4 k.o's)

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    iight da tie gives us each a vote so its 2-1 *me*
    uppin VOTES!!
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  13. QuiVer

    QuiVer New Member

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  14. Makadoshious

    Makadoshious New Member

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    Here is a suggestion:

    Avoid mid nineties rap cliches, polish your punches, look up the meanin of metaphor and similie in an english book, and practice how to effectively use them.

    My vote goes to da future........ barely.
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  15. BLooDSHoTT

    BLooDSHoTT R.I.P. Point Game

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    fair battle....

    both had weak punches....future had the better personals and flow though....there was an abscense of wordplay here which made the battle really boring.....

    vote- da future.....
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  16. *Da FuTuRe*

    *Da FuTuRe* ReCoRd 10-1(4 k.o's)

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    iight dats 4-1 *me* 1 more so UPPIN VOTESSSSSSSSSS!!
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  17. *Da FuTuRe*

    *Da FuTuRe* ReCoRd 10-1(4 k.o's)

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    iight my bad i didnt see da rules i got win!
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