quick freeverse..drop links i return feed a.s.a.p

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  1. ceson

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    beats is alright.. flow is decent.. mixed a little loud..you could put a little more emotion into it.. sound a little monotnous.. not bad for a freeverse..

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    uppin for feed..leave ya links..
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    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    listenin , beats sick ,

    flow was cool on this , seems like it lacked a delivery a little bit ,

    not bad for a freeverse . no lines really stook out had me like OO SHIT .

    But like i said for a free you did ya thing , Pz

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    thx...uppin
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    Mr. sickVisionz The Gentleman's Producer

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    Returning the feedback.

    Beat is straight. Not really liking your voice too much, but I got over that. Your lyrics are straight but every now and then you drop a suspect line imo (that one about chris wallace/ rob n big). Keep grindin though. Peace
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    pretty good freeverse I thought..

    your flow is hot here.. my headphones suck.. but it sounds like ya a bit loud..

    flippin some pretty cool lines.. could stand for a switch up in flow at a point in there..

    overall this was decent man..

    hit me up sometime for a collab


    props


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1032486
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    hit yall back..lookin for more feed.
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    Uppin for feedback...
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    TenFold Planet Rock Nano-Bot

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    i have this same beat..just havent rocked it yet..lyrics arent making any sense to me..the delivery sounds real •••••••••..i mean, i dont really know how to call this one..cant say its bad, cant say its good..


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1032945 - RTF

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