Questions For God

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  1. Predator INC

    Predator INC New Member

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    swingin a broken sword in hopes to provoke the lord
    screamin with my vocal chords like he dont even know the poor
    so i close my door mad cuz he left me to croak and starve
    the bible? fuck it i dont read them quotes no more
    cuz its just folk n lore my spirits hurtin i got open sores
    want my dough to soar take a chance and grow indoors
    im seein shit i aint known before my pains lastin
    almost met the waist basket in form of a suede casket
    my life is way graphic stuck in poverty so weights trafficked
    its why my girl stay manic paranoid so she create panic
    guns loaded so i await havoc n ask whats love n hate
    evils come to stay we coward up and we just run away
    whats above his place? free will and a bunch to say
    when noone else was lookin did his son obey
    he created us but never made a dumb mistake?
    lies hidden in whats written so fuck the fake
    i got some' to say thats why im smart n ask questions
    durin hash sessions i recollect n get mad wrestless
    I see the future i dont look to where the past tense is
    how he mad fortune tellin aint one of mans senses
    so mans defenseless why does yahweh cloak his power
    he didnt stop the smokin towers but i woulda choked them cowards
    let my wrath be be felt and n have they souls devoured
    n made em feel overpowered cuz they deserved golden showers
    see the globe is ours when things goin sower hey remember
    nothins forever even endeavours someday get severed
    aint scared of flames n embers we need to stay together
    and if you do believe please just pray for better
    he needa change the weather whats important is dormant
    he the foreman but he aint carin so i wont ignore it
    nothin left but broken portraits controlled by corporates
    tears are flowin why wont he plug the faucet



    man i use to be top 5 on this bitch wheres all my peoples at leave me a reply and ya link. im a vet on here yall lol.
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  4. Poetic Concept

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    this is ill...very consistant rhyme scheme, good vocab mos of the time when kids vocab is limited there pieces lack the fluidity that u have...This is nice I usually pick out a few fav lines but this 1 went hard from top to bottom...rtf:4
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  5. the omega man

    the omega man so, it goes

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    Good rhyming, I could argue some of your content, but either way good rhyming and good way of expressing your views.
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  6. Predator INC

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    appreciate the replys this came deep from my heart yall so more feedback is appreciated
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  7. bagglad

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    peep--- http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1265609-girl-i-met.html

    yeah this was deep good rhyming it stood out the whole verse did enjoyed deeply

    need a critical hershey bar this a political controversy so far need some chocolate to rock it I'm at dense odds but can't go against god so I'm out of a plan and no doubt this stand the rhyming was hot no doubt Its climbing to the top of Bill Board Charts with an ill sword that chop off heads proud like Mr Mccloud on Highlander
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  8. Predator INC

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    mah nigga bagz money thx for the reply upped
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