protected zone

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  1. cram oremor

    cram oremor New Member

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    I try to let go but my past just echoes

    my hearts attached to da ghetto like da feet of a gecko

    sleep wit a loaded heat unda my sheets

    if a sucka try ta creep ima feed em da metal


    presto, you aint got no head no mo

    ill be dammed if i eva let a man enta my door

    with ulterior motives to bring death to my home

    betta think about it 4 u bring death 2 ur own


    ima christian but wont hesitate to shatter your dome

    take your breath from your chest and give it back to da Lord

    when you enta my protected zone


    Shalom, id ratha live at peace wit choo brutha

    im prayin for da souls in da streets and da guttas

    for da love of da shekle my people killin each otha

    ova da bacon and butta but itz da babies dat suffa


    i think ive had enougha dis planet

    they could drop a nuke and I wouldnt even panic

    dont plan on survivin da damage

    so i wont seek shelta, naw mayne just kickit on da hammock

    hopin dat it lands on da dwellin i inhabit

    cuz i know who im gon spend foreva wit
    test
  2. T.R.C....

    T.R.C.... New Member

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    not too bad man little better than the last one though a few parts seemed forced just keep at it
    test
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