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  1. Erattic

    Erattic New Member

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  2. B!tchPlease

    B!tchPlease New Member

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    yeah this is dope homie...u got an nice flow over the beat too & your rhyme pattern is ill....u make it easy to listen & absorb, real head noddin...your personality comes out on this joint too... .that sample is pretty cool but the breaks sound wrong to me, almost sudden...overall this was hot...keep doing you man

    holla at me
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  3. Erattic

    Erattic New Member

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    thx man...upz
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  5. Erattic

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    thx man... i hit up ur link
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  8. 6th_plague

    6th_plague More then meets the eye

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    damn the beat is DOPE..im really feeling that..

    quality is good..

    lyrics is on point and the flow is mad polished ...i like the sample as the chorus and you talking shit lol this a good album cut for thinking..some real shit everyone can feel

    8.5/10

    good job man
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  9. Erattic

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  10. ? THA RIDD ?

    ? THA RIDD ? New Member

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    good loox on peepin my track....

    yea mellow always drop sickness...and you doing the damn thing on it....

    flow is nice....maintained threwout the track...

    lyrics is on point..even tho i really aint the religious type....still can feel what u layin down...

    solid track playboy...keep bangin em out....

    pzzzz

    ? THA RIDD ?
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  11. Erattic

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    thx... upss
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  12. Mellow Madness

    Mellow Madness aKa sTaTiK

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    dope track.. u rocked this well.. keep it coming. :)
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  13. Erattic

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    thx man... ups
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  15. - Ransom -

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    Beat is crack big ups too Mellow

    1st Verse - Delivery, presence and flow is nice here you definantly rode the beat here, lyrics here

    Hook - is nice and very catchy

    2nd Verse - same as first verse and it was a little better and the first part of this I could relate to

    3rd Verse - This is very nice

    I think your verse are very complex but this is good
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  16. Jae Stoopz

    Jae Stoopz New Member

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    loving the track man...keep doing ya thing...
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  17. Erattic

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  18. Rakuseki

    Rakuseki The Disgruntled Negro

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    Returnin' the favor...

    Excellent flow, really stands out....lyrics are cool but nothing impressive; nice scheme you usin' there.

    Straight track up and down.
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  19. KBlaze™

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    DAM!! Dats Madd Original... U Usin' Home Equipment Ry? Coz Ya Quality [Altho Gud Fa Generic Equipment] Got Flaws. The Original [Hello] Iz One Of My All Times... I Been Waitin'
    Fa Sum1 Ta Use Dis Instrumental, Gud Lookz On Addin Da Bass 'n' Pad Loops, Really
    Equipped It Well For A Hip Hop Trak... Ya Flow Waz kl.. Ya Delivery Waz Killa, For A Challengin' Beat U Spat It Well, Only Thing I Aint Really Feelin' Iz Wen Ya Speakin' Ova
    Tha Hook, Thought Dat Kinda Removed The Classic "Hood" Feel.. Buh Yo Wateva.
    Subject Waz Nice, Def Fittin' Fa The Beat, Az I Seem Ta Say Ta Most Audio Heads..
    Try 'n' Broaden Beyond The Streets.. Buh Yo Ya Potentials Def Gon' Take Ya Der..
    Dis Waz Nice Mayne.. I Personally Liked It...
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  20. illusionMH

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    beat is raw, lyrics are raw , quality is nice, u were on point all the way, overall its a dope track man, nice work
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