Problems

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  1. Infonation

    Infonation Info for the Nation

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    I wasn't brought up in the streets, but I've been threw hard times
    No money, with no food, while shootouts produced high crimes
    Trying to watch the signs for the present and future days to come
    But, no one ever knew which ni*ga carried a gun
    Under his pillow, dreaming of paradise with weeping willows
    Gun cocked, 5 shots, he didn't know he could kill though
    While he's dreamin, someone else's dream becomes a nightmare
    And a victim's mom at a funeral cries that life's not fair
    No one cares, people say your problems are your own
    To solve them, don't ask for help or call them on the phone
    Leave me alone, is what I hear, threw my ear, seeing people's eyes tremble in fear, when no help comes near
    Laugh, snicker, and snear, is how we sometimes solve them
    In my world we don't laugh, we cry, cause we got problems

    ******Problems are not your everyday algerbraic equation
    There hidden in doors and dark alley's,all throughout the nation


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  2. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    "But, no one ever knew which ni*ga carried a gun
    Under his pillow, dreaming of paradise with weeping willows"


    I was feeling those lines, as well as the closing lines. Both had impacted me and hit home, no doubt. I felt as if this was somewhat of a depressing piece, yet an influence to hold your head up high in what you call, 'your world'. A world where crime rules over love at times, hatred rules over love at times, etc. Nice drop, sonnie. My blessings..
    test
  3. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    something i can relate to mos def, word play was nice and the message was clear. Really was feeling them last lines

    one luv
    test
  4. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    this was dope...been feeling your work....think that your a nice addition to the realm....like my opinon matters....[funny]

    flow was nice....really relatable piece...dunno why cats is sleepin.....

    keep it up I
    test
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