Prec1Se ' vs RazPutiN

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  1. Bloody Red

    Bloody Red New Member

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    10 barz + ... postin rite now

    big ups
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  2. Bloody Red

    Bloody Red New Member

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    damn... real talk.. I did freestyle a battle for you

    then I was like .. why waist dudez time .. Ima give you some heat ..

    prolly have it in , in a couple of hours ..

    ight .. g'luck
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  3. Bloody Red

    Bloody Red New Member

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    was out late as fuck getting drunk ... just woke my lazy ass up ...



    my metaphores are sharkes in deep water your more like water parks wit dolphins, you a lil bitch heels click when ya walkin, im a real monster you just holloween trick or treatin ,he dressed up like a radiater still couldnt bring the HEAT in/
    Thinkin he can step to the best but like the rest he's taken a beatin, I like yo style best when you sees and stop speakin , his style best described is a dude not thinkin , so when I put the hammer to his head itll do what his cd wont and start leakin/
    you a WANNA (B) .... (C) ... cuz you cant BE ... ( D E F )"DEFF".., ALL YOU CAN BE is a fucken ARMY chef, cut ya hands off make you write with ya toes.. the real meaning of DEFEAT when I tear down ya SOUL/
    Im breakin down this toddler its a younger Im the father and this toddler's name is randa its a she ' she's my daughter...napalm ya bedroom burn you from collar da collar...you probably gotta rhyme book and I bet that shits empty...ya flow aint worth 2 in the bush or a hole in a penny/




    I know you wanted more then 10 .. dog I aint wrote a battle verse in years .. lol
    do you , drop as many as you want ..
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  4. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    I could type when Im drunk as hell and still deliver an L to this lame
    Your loisng tihs btatle easily, bithc yuo olny got the WON in your name
    kids hit you up on the AIM like "yo he nice", and they be right
    I'll grab thee knife, put him inna box like delivery pizza and leave pre-sliced
    your fuckin dumb and malnutrioned, the prognosis; Pre-tarded
    I'll rip this chicago cats hopes out the air faster than steve bartman
    I'll go to your HOMETOWN and take your chick to the i max
    romance her, pants her then fuck her in the snatch until she Chi max
    yousa a fake, a fraud, a liar, yea this dude is too lame
    and if you was ill with the Mike, I'd still slaughter you on the new Nba 2k game

    with the 98' Jazz bitch peace out
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  5. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    prec1se has good vocabulary and RaZ came with solid cold punches.Is this a one rounder? If it is,I'll vote right now.If not? I'll wait.And my battle with Bar Nigga is done so yall can vote there too.
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  6. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    this is just a one rounder for now but id be glad to go more

    ill go vote on your battle right now
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  7. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    If this is a 1 rounder as RaZ indicated and prec1se's "10 bar comment" seems to make absolutely clear,then...

    VOCAB-PREC1SE...This category was close because a subcat of Vocab is Word Selection and RaZ won that subcat hands down,but prec1se had literally more advanced words used correctly so he won this category narrowly.Unfortunately prec1se was less than what his name claims in spelling,punch delivery,etc.

    ALL OTHER CATS: RaZ

    Punches,Flow,Opener,Metas,Closer,Sound Manipulation, Humor,Attitude,Creativity,Flow,Rhyme Scheme...RaZ Boss Hog'd em all.Easily.His opening prediction:

    "I could type when Im drunk as hell and still deliver an L to this lame"

    is exactly right,although to me prec1se isn't a lame and should be encouraged to keep writing.With a vocab like that and more practice? Kid'd be bad news purrty fast.
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  8. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    Prec1se.. ummm ur style of writing is too long. I mean it wasnt bad, but it wasnt effective either fora battle verse. You rambled more than directly attackng ur a point. If youd cut out that blah, youd do better wth ur punchez. RaZ nice shit, I remember you kllng niggaz n the league. Your pizza line and won line mad me laugh. V=RaZ
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  9. DFVaInSDF

    DFVaInSDF I'm Back

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    Yea the structure sucked but it was easy to read, just follow the commas! Don't put commas bruh just press "enter"
    prec1se
    my metaphores are sharkes in deep water your more like water parks wit dolphins,
    you a lil bitch heels click when ya walkin,
    im a real monster you just holloween trick or treatin ,
    he dressed up like a radiater still couldnt bring the HEAT in/

    Nice opener coulda been better but not needed

    Thinkin he can step to the best but like the rest he's taken a beatin,
    I like yo style best when you sees and stop speakin ,
    his style best described is a dude not thinkin ,
    so when I put the hammer to his head itll do what his cd wont and start leakin/
    filler, and unless u underground, peops don't really want their cd leaked, its a publicity stunt that trades sales off in an attempt to gain exposure, hopefully leading to better sales. hopefully.

    you a WANNA (B) .... (C) ... cuz you cant BE ... ( D E F )"DEFF"..,
    ALL YOU CAN BE is a fucken ARMY chef,
    forced, shoulda left it out

    cut ya hands off make you write with ya toes..
    the real meaning of DEFEAT when I tear down ya SOUL/
    played, any "defeat" line is dead and gone

    Im breakin down this toddler its a younger Im the father and this toddler's name is randa its a she ' she's my daughter
    ...napalm ya bedroom burn you from collar da collar...
    waaay too long bruh, and kinda simple too

    you probably gotta rhyme book and I bet that shits empty...
    ya flow aint worth 2 in the bush or a hole in a penny/
    decent end

    Raz
    I could type when Im drunk as hell and still deliver an L to this lame
    Your loisng tihs btatle easily, bithc yuo olny got the WON in your name
    Nice opener, setup coulda been better but gud enuff

    kids hit you up on the AIM like "yo he nice", and they be right
    I'll grab thee knife, put him inna box like delivery pizza and leave pre-sliced
    I get it, just kinda corny, i mean, all that ta get a pre-sliced joke? really

    your fuckin dumb and malnutrioned, the prognosis; Pre-tarded
    I'll rip this chicago cats hopes out the air faster than steve bartman
    Another attempt ta dis his name, don't over do it bruh

    I'll go to your HOMETOWN and take your chick to the i max
    romance her, pants her then fuck her in the snatch until she Chi max
    i think u meant "depants her" but w/e this was kinda funny

    yousa a fake, a fraud, a liar, yea this dude is too lame
    and if you was ill with the Mike, I'd still slaughter you on the new Nba 2k game
    filler, not really a gud ending

    Idk really, ya'll kinda tied to me but if I gotta pick I'd run wit Prec1se just cuz it seemed to be more at his opponent. If I offended ya'll wit da critique, my bad, I go in a lil too much sometimes when I critique texts cuz there's no mistaking wut was said ya kno. Aiyo Prec1se I remember u from a while back, u shoulda woke up and spit dat shit man, stop half-assin. U still won to me, but barely. Raz, u went second, with his verse, I guess u just got cocky, but u shoulda took this. Easily.

    When ya'll get a chance, feel free to tear down my songs! lol hit da links in my sig and let me kno wut ya'll think. Gud look.
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  10. Bloody Red

    Bloody Red New Member

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    yea no doubt ^ its been a minute .. a GOOD minute if you feel me ..

    what was ya old name so ? ?
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  11. DFVaInSDF

    DFVaInSDF I'm Back

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    Its always been Vains on here, just diff. variations from losin passwords. We wasn't cool or nuttin, I just remembered ya from back then, back when Jeff was doin everything, at least most of it!
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  12. Gsus

    Gsus aka Wordz bka G. Legit

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    its a tie, both of em fell off...precise fell off at the end and Raz came up short in the beginning but finished strong, ima have to see a second round
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  13. Gen The God

    Gen The God The Life or Death Poet

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    Weak battle

    Punches: Bleh Raz
    Metas/Wordplay: Raz
    Multis: Eh Raz but both were so-so
    Personals: Raz
    Flow: Raz
    Overall: Raz

    The Steve Bartman line was the X-factor in this battle. Knockout metaphor and personal all in one shot.
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