Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by d0mniscient, Jul 3, 2013.
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You both fall off beat a few times, the attempt to emulate meeks style was bad.The clams casino-esque beat is dope but I think you guys should re-record this and don't settle for good enough.
first off, no one attempted to emulate meeks style, rofl, 2nd off, cool feed back but I feel like you're just a hater haha. you should post a reply of one of your songs on this thread, I wanna see what you got bruh ahahahhaha
When you end a line with a significantly higher pitch on the rhyming word, and then in the next line you repeat the same formula, that's not an original style, it's a style that another rapper created but don't fret, even Game is biting it :
Fast Fwd to 2:04 for the example. You don't need to "see what I've got," chances are, you already have and have no idea...My critics write for magazines, why would I ask for criticism from someone who doesn't even know he's a biter.
you're officially retarded, ROFL.
Biters opinions are of no consequence. Especially those who bite and try to pretend they have no clue what I mean...
This is you rhyming over a Game beat, a beat from the same album where he used the meek style...So you bit Game biting someone else...LOL Who's the retard now?
? its a dope beat? Im not biting anyones style..? listen to my lyrics, and you've never hit someone elses beat? hahah, still havent seen your shit, and im not gonna bother looking you up, so you can post your shit or not, but until then you can go suck a dick l0l I guarantee you dont got shit on me as a rapper
A. I've listened to your lyrics...I couldn't give a proper observation of your bad cadence and biting if I had not.
B. The only time I go over someone else beat is if it's a battle and I have no control over what the D.J. plays.
C. Thanks. I'd prefer to keep my anonymity, but I won't be sucking any dicks.
D. Your "guarantee," gives me the feeling as if I'm going to smile but I only grin a little, like when one of those teacup doggies growls at you and licks it teeth...So cute.
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