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Discussion in 'Writer's Block' started by UFO the Phoenix, Jan 23, 2005.

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  1. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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    Im Posting this under the request of UFO.....

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    I’ve Met My wizard, and now feel like Melting Tin
    She doesn’t practice black magic but it seems the spell is in
    Because this witchcraft makes me feel as blobbed as Jelleten
    From the mind, to the body, and throughout my skeleton
    I Tremble – Sin, I Smile – Seduction, I Breathe and Bliss
    She doesn’t control my world but glares across my nebulous
    This Spell subtracts from my confidence but doesn’t touch my conceitedness
    Go Inside the ridge and coincide lips performance:
    That’s a smoke screen on a map with no coordinates
    Guarded in the first place by swordfish,
    Only able to be defeated by those they can’t torment,
    And once I Reach the Map, The path starts when the Norm-Ends
    And each drawbridge draws drama
    Until some glitch causes camas, pauses, and stop signs until the irrigation ritual of farmers, and I get Cut up and flooded
    Regretting and Anticipating what the alcohol in Cupids Blood Did
    Now Feeling like a Swan Dipped Rejected Monster Mud Kid
    With a gallant warrior who’s a tad naive in my Shut Pit
    I Regret My Mistakes but gladly Give whatever this Miss Takes
    ”You Should Follow Your heart and Mind Together instead of sit on Steel Crates”
    Sure this Tips Great but How am I Supposed to Apply it
    When I don’t understand my entrails, and if I do my tongue chooses to be defiant
    But in Honesty, if we talked would you be complaint? {Thought Not}
    I’ve Fucked myself over and had the nerve to Time it
    So that in future epics I can Rewind it; I Need Guidance
    We were asked if we’re together or having fun and sat in silence
    as if neither was the answer, I Guess its not rocket Science
    I’m Hurt in a confused way, maybe Happy in a Dark Allegory
    Hopefully though, I’ve stuck myself in the wrong category
    Maybe I didn’t catch your story, but Please come talk to me
    I Take your words with a hundred percent Honesty
    It’s the fact I don’t hear many words and don’t see you calling me
    I Feel Neglect, I Feel Doubt, I Feel so much
    maybe it’s my own stupidity that’s taunting me

    I Realize Our Relations are between the docking stations
    and the sign that says “Paid Vacation,” So Using the process of elimination
    I’m left with a confusing heads up, a bag of laughs and a fist full of frustration
    Sitting on the seat meant for director Quiet on the set of my own Riot:
    Hating Games, So excuse my personalities lack of being a kamikaze pilot
    And if life handed me the cheats to this game and said “try it”
    the little puppeteer hand on my left shoulder would say “don’t buy it”
    Looking at my emotions system you can pry in, or just spend the quality
    and get to know me over time, not waste the time quantity
    Sure we learn while we fuck up this city, but the fucked up forget – What a Pity
    Sometimes we’re lazy, Sometimes we’re Giddy, Sometimes I’m Down
    And Sometimes you Lift Me, But it’s those times I Feel Dead like Kenny
    my Canteen is Empty and it’s then you choose to receive my last Penny
    Realistically, right now I’d choose you over any
    And I Feel You’d do the same, Not Implying your selfish
    I’ll just give you your goodnight kiss before telling you, you have my best wish
    I See a smile on your face and can’t resist
    But I see you ignore me and get confused in jist
    You fail to act upon my catalyst, I think I Failed at my Best
    But Maybe It’s my depressing side, Maybe I’m your side depression
    it sucks so much that thinking has become my side obsession
    Do You use me as your scapegoat or mental protection?
    No, Of course Im wrong, just look at our connection
    I Don’t want clarity on things I’ve heard and mentioned
    I want clarity on where we stand, while you stand before me
    I’ve ignored your stories of those who’ve come before me
    But I’m nothing so saying before might stick me in the wrong category
    maybe I didn’t catch Your Story, but Please come talk to me
    I Take your words with a hundred percent Honesty
    It’s the fact I don’t hear many words and don’t see you calling me
    I Feel Neglect, I Feel Doubt, I Feel so much
    maybe it’s my own stupidity that’s taunting me
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  2. Pious

    Pious LET ME LEAD YOU......

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  3. Madpoet

    Madpoet why is this so short....

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    *signs in*
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  4. devilkitty

    devilkitty New Member

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    this sounds real interesting...i'm definitely feelin the idea
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  5. SIZZLA

    SIZZLA New Member

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    all of my work is my best...
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  6. Madnick

    Madnick Modern Laureate

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    UFO I cant do this I dont have the money sorry
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  7. ~Eloquent

    ~Eloquent Narcissistic....

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    im losing some money now cuz of this fuckin car accident
    but i still want in,
    its now or never if i want to try to get some exposure...
    itll take me a while to find the one i want though...
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  8. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    thanks for the heads up, but I think this should be more for the younger heads.
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  9. Look im Gangsta

    Look im Gangsta New Member

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    Shut up.
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  10. MC Radical

    MC Radical twitter.com/TheLastHero69

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    Poetry.com is just a SCAM. They just want the money. And the way the books is done from what I've heard is horrible.
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  11. Philly_215

    Philly_215 The Silent Poet

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    yeah i heard that the other day !!
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  12. RealMS

    RealMS Ne te quaesiveris extra

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    Get the e-mails crackin yall, cannot be put on hold
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  13. MarQuise*

    MarQuise* Can You Hear Me*

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    i like this idea =)

    Im pretty much interested
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  14. Sykda

    Sykda New Member

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    I'd have to get 20 bucks soonbut I am willing to get hte money for this idea.. its very good idea.
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  15. Philly_215

    Philly_215 The Silent Poet

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    I NEED SOME HELP PICKING ONE (i got way to many and its hard for me to pick ) SO I NEED HELP PEOPLE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  16. For the Cause

    For the Cause Liberty needs glasses

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    UFO its not really a good time for me financially,dog
    im fallin behind my bills and all so ill have to scratch myself off the list,cuz every amount of money ive got right now,
    i have to make sure i spend it wisely,
    one.
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  17. Grupe Home

    Grupe Home Knowledge Of Past

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    This whole things sounds ill. Post my last poem in it. Whats the funds needed?

    I came out of nowhere

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    I came out of nowhere, I've been here before
    I was uncut 'for any one of you was raw
    I learned the ropes, I skipped over tokes
    Don't read my shit too much or else your mind will overdose

    I miss this place
    As a kid I used to lace up more than just my shoes
    My ways I couldn't choose
    Mentality inconsistent with the fact I was a youth
    Place me on the stand; affirm I'll say the truth
    "I knocked him in his teeth; show the judge your 1 last tooth"

    Young offender shit, ask have I even grown?
    I've said it all before, a group home aint no home
    I'll never lie, but can I tell the truth?
    My word is good attorneys should just take it as the proof

    Intellect high - "bright kid" as they scold him
    I stuck my ass in school to prevent boredom
    Orphan minority, "can’t say we didn’t warn him"
    If my pops would listen I swear to god my thoughts could floor him
    But I guess they right, I was looking for the fight
    So I serve the next 9 cuz I hit him more than twice

    Ask If I deserve it, nah it doesn’t matter
    Blowing shit up, drawing bomb threats like a flower
    My minds consumed, more thoughts and inspirations
    Then a manifest destiny plans on with neighbor nations

    Just to sum up - remember this kid’s name
    See him in the spotlight - Grupe Home hall of fame
    Humble at best, third person in the worst
    His bubble so strong to a slug it couldn’t burst
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  18. TrueEmcee

    TrueEmcee Run.

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    UFO give an update on the ccurrent situation!
    maybe some other poets may still even wanna get in on it, who knows
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  19. ~Eloquent

    ~Eloquent Narcissistic....

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    word..did you get my email UFO?,
    i sent four poems,should i keep them all or just pick one?
    holla back
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  20. Luther Blissett

    Luther Blissett What Goods A Loofah For?

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