Poem (real shit)

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  1. mr.redeyez

    mr.redeyez Member

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    IF I DIE TONIGHT, JUST KNOW IT WAS DESTINE
    I'D BE FOREVER WEARY, TILL I'M RESTIN'
    ETERNALY, IN THA DIRT WITH THA PEASANT'S
    I REMEMBER BACK IN THA DAY'Z, EVERY DAY WAS A BLESSIN'
    I CHERISHED EVERY HOLIDAY, EVERY BREATH EVERY PRESENT
    ALLWAY'S A SMILE ON MY FACE, NOW-N-DAY'S IT'S DEPRESSIN'
    I'M STRESSIN', WILL I LIVE TO SEE FORTUNE-N-FAME
    LISTEN TO MY CONFESSION, I SIN MY FUTURE IS TORTURE-N-PAIN
    HOW CAN A 21 YEAR OLD, BE SO OBESSED WITH FATE?
    BECAUSE I'M OPRESSED, BUT WAIT... I ALSO LOST MY FAITH
    SOMETIME'S... I SIT AN WONDER, IS LIFE REALLY A DREAM..?
    WILL WE AWAKE IN PARADISE, DESPITE LIVIN' WITH GREED.
    OUR BODY COSUMED WITH LIGHT, BURDEN'S 'N STRIFE RELIEVED
    THIS POEM I WRITE IS DEEP, I EARNED MY RIGHT TO BLEED
    I WROTE IT IN RHYME FORM, THA FORM THAT U CAN READ
    I'M TORN, IN BETWEEN SCIENCE -N- BELIEF
    BUT MY BELIEF, IS HIGHER BUT LIGHTER THAN A LEAF
    NO JOKE, I CAN FEEL THA FIRE UNDERNEATH
    I'M TIRED OF THA GRIEF
    I TELL EM' I'M GOOD THEY SAY, LIAR LIAR U A BEAST
    I CAN'T LIE I LOVE VIOLENCE IT'S RELIEF
    MR.REDYEZ LAST OF A DYIN BREED
    ...THATS'Z DEEP...
    NOW U CAN BREATH.


    IF U READ THA WHOLE THING.....
    MAN I'M TELLIN U.
    THIS IS THA REALEST SHIT I EVER WROTE











    http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1242111-chase-murda-presents-u-niggaz-suspect.html#post1067606109


    http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/...lothes-were-tattered-torn.html#post1067606119
    test
  2. K_WATTz

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  3. Radical Sun

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    Tight man
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