Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by iLL Script., Jan 29, 2004.
decent piece...i know the feeling...nice emotional piece
made for a nice read
can definitely feel this piece - not there at the moment but been there - its alrite - after awhile u get numb, and then start feeling bad about not feeling bad anymore....heh.
iunoo this peice was like mad depressing, with the same theme. i'll be truthfull man, i wasn't really feellin it but i read ur collab stuff wit poet n that was tight as fuck, so im awaiting to see more, wun
thankz everybody. anybody else lol
that was a good piece... expressed yourself nicely.. format was on point.. flowed nicely throughout.. and was a bit depressing... tight shit dog....... keep um coming... i'll check the rest in the siggie.. pz god
i havent read anything from you before but i can definately relate to this poem, alot of the things describe i can certainly link back to myself. its good to know someone else feels the same. even though theres heaps. but very nice poem, the description was good and i will read more from you from now on.
GOT TO SAY THIS IS AN AWESOME PIECE TWENTY FIVE RESPONSE ;WELL LET ME PUT MINE UP IN HERE FOR REAL
Holding a swaying thug’s gun is like weighing above a ton
Them scrubs run and duck lead game has no love dun
Yeah having critical wisdom is like a political system can’t
Duck debates my luck either she or he hates as rhythm taints
Face psycho action like Michael Jackson see funky lame
Troubles got a monkey name bubbles get lumpy fame
Arrested for tucking in cats for bucking my stats, cops
Silly and mean like Billy Jean the brutality don’t stop
My imagination is in Never, Never Land stay bound
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