Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by pLatinUm meth, May 24, 2003.
1'st to 5 votes wins
3-0 is K.O
5-10 min'z limit pe'Ce
If heads only knew how I felt about the rap game//
They'd relocate, and change their fuckin name//
I eradicate movefakers, roll with coat shakers//
Give dap to mad money makers//
Shared cells with lifetakers, have sex with rumpshakers//
I make moves so I'ma earthquaker//
I've been known to instill fear//
Although the world may be round, we still trapped in the square//
City light, got me buggin and trife//
Some die by the gun, some die by the knife//
It's alright, like a game of spades I'm trump tight//
Premier hit me with music to ensure that it thump right//
And my flight, will be taken solely at night//
Cause that's when the freaks come out, no doubt//
And in the dark hours is when I will shower//
with the knowledge of my trade to get paid//
Still I make moves like a snake in the grass, roundabout//
I be dickin it down while you be assed out//
Puff mad L's but never passed out//
And if I'm caught up in a jam I blast my way out//
There'll be no lettin up, just straight shuttin up//
or we'll start the wettin up//
Lyrical infrared sceptor never miss you//
deadakited to ma br0 died of an O.D in may 10th 1999
im usin his street name pLatinUm meth
i waz almost done ritin that when i deisded to battLe kiLLa s0o i t0ok me about 9 min'z to rite
Another wacc textcee on the cover, it’s just a new seen/
Rippin’ you page by page until I empty out this magazine/
Jammin’ the heat to your cheek cause now it’s my turn/
With hot lead in your face, you really got side burns/
It’s a hard drive to this win, your PC’s(pieces) are threatened/
You got punches like faulty modems, they can’t be connected/
Just Cause you another net gangsta, your name I'm denouncin'/
Breakin' your fantasy world, even your reality checc is bouncin'/
battled on tile, you still couldn't pose a threat in this place/
dont fuck wit da klown or youll be laced up and left & outaspace/
edit: forgot to put the "be"
open 4 votes w0w kiLLa that waz a really niCe rap i think this will b cLose
how did it take u 9 minutez and u posted da intro to da thread 2 minutes before you wrotye ur rap yo?? Dont tell me ur biting....im juss curious
he already made that... he just posted it for the first time ....
lol no like i said i waz midway of ritein it when i desided to battLe kiLLa so i fished then made the thread then i l0oked ova it an posted it i think it came out really nice i t0ok alota pointz fr0m sum g0od rappers an i t0ok ur idea on waitin to get into a crew intill i have 300 posts an like 16 battLes
alota of the ppl gave me pointz an i used them all on this 1 an i really like the way it is
the last thing on earth i would do is bite i would kill my seLf b4 i stole sum 1 eles work
Plat...first off, pre-writes are a no-no. Plus, your verse wasn't even close to a battle. It was all about you and what you do. You didn't even make an attempt to diss KK.
KK...you actually had punches and what not in your verse. You BATTLED him instead of just talkin about yourself. Easy vote...
nice verse but it really ain't a battle verse
iight im still losin 0-1
k2 ur rite i did fuk up i waz takin every 1s addvise an i 4 got alot of it s0o i didnt have punches in it but hey it waz my best eva
need sum votes here
this is open to any 1 to vote god damn vote ppL!!!!
Vote: killa klown
Plat= i dont know what that was dawg..but it wasnt a good battle verse in my opinion..
killa= you actually had a battle verse!! lol.. nah but seriously that was overall good battle verse and u ripped him straight up..
go peep my battle against rememberverb we need votes
iight 0-2 kiLLaz lead im getin K.Oed with sum thin i put my heart an soul into man this suCkz o well thats life well we need m0re votes lets end this fast
lay off tha kid he is jus startin at this
but yo u should be in tha DoJo
hey man itz iight i still suCk dont worry ill get betta sum day till then ill take my loses
im not sayin you suck niga just that it wasnt a battle verse...keep ya head up and keep doin what u doin
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