Pissed off with Hip-hop

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  1. Mrjdm998

    Mrjdm998 New Member

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    I've just spent like two hours on Ultimate Mortal Kombat 3 (Which is a few months older than me 0__o) getting killed by some fucking horse man robot mouse thing over and over, so I'm a bit annoyed, so just wrote some stuff.

    I'm related to the Jeepers Creepers creature
    So it's natural to rearrange the facial features of facecious wannabe leaders
    Cause psudo-teachers to have violent seizures
    Rip their skin off with tweezers and use it to wrap-up blunts packed with reefer
    Spit heatseekers at preachers stitch them together like sneakers
    The grim reaper I use a meat cleaver to fit bodies in my freezer
    Cut open your flesh expose everything like a streaker
    Make you look like you got crushed by an 18-wheeler when I beat you with your own femur
    A sniping cyborg connected to a serial killer writing thoughts
    Slicing and dicing swords inside a mad scientists splicing ward
    The fighting sort and an exciting force
    Chose to battle? Well I guess your sightings short
    I'll pack up all my sharpest of blades charge through the harshest of rains
    Just can't wait to start the harvest of brains
    Violent but still in the smartest of brigades
    As I spot rappers unharness grenades and exit the darkest of shades

    If I said I wasn't pissed off? That would be a lie
    I just want most rappers to up and die
    If you said I was mad? You'd probebly be right
    That's why I'm writing these verses tonight

    The result of Mike Myers crossed with Mike Myers (Geddit)
    I dislike liars so bend their spines round like bike tires
    When the fight transpires expect to see me wielding spiked pliers
    And battle armour fashioned from the fur of white tigers
    I aim at high flying moving planes like it's a shooting game
    Causing booming flames to drop down like polluting rain
    Sleep in a pit of defective needles guarded by protective eagles
    My blood types not right 'cus of aggresive measels
    Known to fight off hordes of enemys to stop oppressive evil
    Backmask messages on 8 tracks to make an army of suggestive people
    My stare makes your vision blur like you're on a drink'n binge
    With eye lasers which burn your flesh pink'n orange
    More solid bars than a cell block and more lines than a drug cartels got
    My very existence is the reason that hells hot
    Two ninja stars while wearing all black make you fall back
    Finish every day by placing a dead rappers face on my wall plaque

    If I said I wasn't pissed off? That would be a lie
    I just want most rappers to up and die
    If you said I was mad? You'd probebly be right
    That's why I'm writing these verses tonight
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  2. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    niiiice good job
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  3. Mrjdm998

    Mrjdm998 New Member

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    Gonna try and get another pair of verses up for this, I just added one, think it's quite good personally.
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  4. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Word.Drop it.
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  5. Mrjdm998

    Mrjdm998 New Member

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    I made the verses 16 lines instead of 8 so the hook isn't their to many times.
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  6. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    aight put it down
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  7. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    this was alright ... a lil different but it got my attention
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  8. Open Mic Kingz

    Open Mic Kingz T.a.C & JASON ANTHONY

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    Sick rhyme, but JA and TaC still the kingz, son.

    haha... but really, this shit was nice. Keep droppin em. You're one of the few posters I can read without wanting to kill myself.
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  9. Mrjdm998

    Mrjdm998 New Member

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    Cheers.
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