piss off!!

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by HamHockDaHustla, Mar 15, 2011.

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  1. HamHockDaHustla

    HamHockDaHustla hand rock ta customas

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    you limey as fuck why you try you jus suck//
    homey tie both ur nuts to a high rollin truck//
    and ride roll and jump off a height known as FUCK//
    go hide hold and tuck both sides of your junk//
    cuz homie you dont know how dope that my soul//
    goes slow flow to slow blows how low does your hole go?//
    open ur throat hole your whole flow is homo go choke on a blow hole//
    roast ur isopropyls this title molds you to heights of noble knights n mogouhls //
    the sight beholds you the right unknown of viking clones an lighting drones//
    its quite gung hoe how i light this flow with a night light show and a knife fight pown//


    lets go!
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  2. Halloween Jack

    Halloween Jack Heavens Demon

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    isopropyl is rubbing alcohol.
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  3. JASON ANTHONY

    JASON ANTHONY White Devil

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    Why wasn't this just posted in the cypher? no good needs to come back and enforce.
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  4. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    yes JA I need to be back modding this bitch.
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  5. Halloween Jack

    Halloween Jack Heavens Demon

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    this isn't a cypher though.
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  6. DemiGod

    DemiGod Peef Rimgar

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    I was just checking in on this

    wtf?
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  7. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    You are on some hardcore shit, i can't hate on that, i think you could drop even more graphic and dont let the attempt at internal rhyme mess up with what you are trying to convey, i would rather read a series of tight images or punches than try to push through some forced rhymes.

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    and ride roll and jump off a height known as FUCK//
    go hide hold and tuck both sides of your junk/
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